Wild Line

my first game-demo is aviable for download!

Story
4 brothers, dropped of in norway by their parents. the war cud have killed the brothers...
in the year 1342 in Clavernia:
10. March 1342
I'v Finally have enuogh gold to buy this diary.
11. March 1342
the king is woried about his people...it have been night since th 10th.
12. March 1342
i dont know...what shud i do?
13. March 1342
Im hiding form Grim Reaper self! i found my wife dead at the stairs up to my house!
what shud I du now? are im gonna die? are im gonna live?

==-Dead-==1342 - 13. March 23:06
its your task to defeat the Grim Reaper and save the world!

Actors & Classes
Stian

Warrior, beginnig level 1

Håvard

Archer, Beginning level 2

Sander

Assasin, Beginning level 2

Kristian

Sura, Beginning level 2

Screenshots














Link to forum and download
www.freewebs.com/naith

The link is down

im confused:

why do you start in the middle of a forest why is their a tent with a cave to a city?
whats with the boat its huge?
I know i am stian but who is that?
Why do doors talk to you?
I can understand buildings that are slightly larger on the inside but that library was huge you entered to the north appear to the south and :S?
why can you walk on tables?
Who is harvard?
where am i?
what year is it?

THIS IS SO CONFUSING

well...i havent updated the version at a long time, sorry, i'l better update it soon...

the table thing...sorry about that...ehhhh
Its a sign outside of the doors that are telling you where your going.
the year is 19 years later the 1342
you will find much more when the updated version comming up

- Bug-fix
- story
- longer demo
- more dungeons
- more equipments
- more Items

and remeber...this is my first game!

The link is down

No! it isent! in that case www.freewebs.com/naith

Naith;

Your mapping is poor. As it was already mentioned, things don't seem to make sense. The player walks into a tent and is transported into a cave. As the player exits the cave he comes out into a city...just a little weird. I don't want to pick at your mistakes, for I was once like that to. Improve your mapping skills, and create a cohesive, integrated story. There are many tutorials in these forums that can help you with your mapping.

Dragonforce does rock.
Mercenary is BETTER!

... Zul'Aman entrance??

Okay, have you ever seriously been inside a house that looked like this?
Read some mapping tutorials.

Oh, and use spellcheck.

Naith;

Your mapping is poor. As it was already mentioned, things don't seem to make sense. The player walks into a tent and is transported into a cave. As the player exits the cave he comes out into a city...just a little weird. I don't want to pick at your mistakes, for I was once like that to. Improve your mapping skills, and create a cohesive, integrated story. There are many tutorials in these forums that can help you with your mapping.

Give me an example, please.

Okay, have you ever seriously been inside a house that looked like this?
Read some mapping tutorials.

Oh, and use spellcheck.

yes, i've been in a huse like this

Okay, have you ever seriously been inside a house that looked like this?
Read some mapping tutorials.

yes. i've been in a house like this, hehe

... Zul'Aman entrance??

I've must do something drastic! LEAVE MY TITLE ALONE! IT GETS SAD!!!!

Here is the link for the tutorial database. It WASN'T hard to find either.

http://rmrk.net/index.php/board,116.0.html

Look through that database and you'll find plenty of help from others who are trying to help those with poor mapping skills.

yes. i've been in a house like this, hehe, my granfathers livingfroom...

Your grandfather must be a highly wealthy and eccentric man, then.

Nice quadruple post, by the way.

Even so, the Mapping isn't realistic & it burns me, & there's an edit button so you won't have to Quadruple-post.

The mapping burns!
Title screen looks awful.

This is a screenie from my game that I am working on. I think I am half decent at mapping. I am comparing it to yours because mine did looked similar to yours games.
We, or at least I am not trying to discourage your rpg making skills. But it is nice to see improvements. 


http://i313.photobucket.com/albums/ll387/hagotis/Screenshot-A.jpg

yes. i've been in a house like this, hehe, my granfathers livingfroom...

Your grandfather must be a highly wealthy and eccentric man, then.

Nice quadruple post, by the way.

hehe...

This is a screenie from my game that I am working on. I think I am half decent at mapping. I am comparing it to yours because mine did looked similar to yours games.
We, or at least I am not trying to discourage your rpg making skills. But it is nice to see improvements. 


http://i313.photobucket.com/albums/ll387/hagotis/Screenshot-A.jpg

i know, you just wanna help me...