[Music] How is this coming out mah ppl?

this is something i'm working on.  It isn't done much yet and i just wana know if its coming out good..

soo..


yeah

Also: I will add a bass, just getting to know the bass-ics [/zypher joke]

And, thanks for the comments moo because i know you're gonna just say its good as always ;-;

Lol. I HATE IT. THERE'S NOTHING THERE.

thanks for the comments moo...

Seriously, get the music up D: I'm dying to hear it.

oh lol forgot

This is extremely peaceful sounding, I really like it. Make sure when you do the bass you have a lot of fun with it, because with a song like this a bass melody is really important.

Ohhh... The reverb-ish thing... I like it It fits so perfectly. And it sounds nice~ I wonder how he's going to do the bass~

This is extremely peaceful sounding, I really like it. Make sure when you do the bass you have a lot of fun with it, because with a song like this a bass melody is really important.

Teach me, oh great curlyhair ;-;

Just run with it

And by that you mean?

Idk. Just make something that sounds good that goes along. You can go with Zyphson's idea of making a whole melody for it or you just do, like, a couple of notes per measure or something.

I thought you'd be able to understand "Run with it" so my explanation is not good ;-; It's more of a natural thingy, I guess. I have the natural thingy but I lack the skill D:

Is this what you mean?

There are just 4 bars of bass but just tell me if they sound good. I think they suck :\ but i dont know much about bass

Something like that would be good, if it were on-key

Bass is just something you feel, iykwim~

Something like that would be good, if it were on-key

;-;

Also, i have no feelings

* Nightwolf opens bass guide.

I will only progress when i get this bass done.

Double post because for some reason when i edit the last post i can't put an attachment ..
:O

How's this? I added more notes and changed them so it fits a little more

Imo, the bass sounds a whole step down. That's what I noticed when I first heard it It's good, though

I have no constructive criticism  =o  Just wanted to say it sounds cool, keep working at it

Mmmm... dissonance. But I'm guessing that's not what you're going for. In which case, moo is right, and you need to double check the notes in the bass because they're clashing with the guitar. Most just need to be a whole step higher, while others are fine.

Oki doky lemon shpokey.

edit: meaning ok i'll try.

You've improved.