You're very good at chord progressions, my number 1 criticism is there's no obvious melody.
Uh... did you listen? The melody is pretty obvious. And the melody need not always BE obvious. I'd expect a more intelligent response from you.
Well sorry lol. Apparently my brain's screwed up and I'm just not hearing it. I was only able to listen to the first two, and I saw a lot of chords, but not OBVIOUS melody. I never said the music was bad, I like it a lot. It just all seems similar and I wanted to take kind a Simon Cowell approach to things for once. Of course, there's always the chance that I just missed it. My family's ADHD, OCD, etc. So if something takes a while to get into the main part I end up not listening to it. This inclues movies, books, music, etc.
EDIT : I feel like an idiot now. I owe an apology to JoelCMJ. I just listened to the first one and was like, "Oh, there it is." The way my brain works, if something takes a while to connect to something else, I completely forget the first part, so all I heard the first time (in the midst of a migraine) was chord progressions. But, as I said, I see it now. So, I apologize JoelCMJ, keep up the good work, just keep writing and you'll get even better in no time.
EDIT 2:Halo's Heart -
I love you too HOTS <3