[Writing] More of Forcystus's Lyrics

[Forty]

Yeah, I decided to write more lyrics.

The Storm Has Only Begun
Intro (Rain and Thunder Noises)
The rain may have stopped,
But it doesn't mean the storm is over
It only means that the after has begun

Chorus
You built this city once they say
Why can't you just do it again they say
Well listen to me, it isn't all that easy
A lot of the damage is on the inside
I may have recovered once you know,
Don't expect it to happen again

Verse 1
I can't just rebuild,
The holes are just too large for me
I need help from the outside now
Give me a nail? I need more than one
Sorry to say, if you don't help me now
I could be, destroyed beyond repair

Chorus

Verse 2
I know I'm loved, but where did it go?
Where does the help go when needed
If I needed it then, I really need it now
Holes in my roof, rain leaking in
I'm not going to move, it doesn't matter
I won't even bother, 'cause when it rain it pours

Chorusx2

Bridge
Where does the rain come from?
Why am I getting wet?
They don't want the rain
Where does the hatred come from?
Why is someone else's bad day mine?
They don't want the sorrow

Chorus

(And here is another song)

Suicide? No Way
(guitar riff)

Verse 1
Suicide is not a way out
It just closes all the doors
Suicide does not clean sorrows
It only makes more
Suicide is not the easy way out
It's the worst way to go

Chorus
Suicide? No Way
Suicide? No Way
It will never do any good
Suicide? No Way
Suicide? No Way
Suicide is never the way out

Verse 2
Suicide just might make the news
But there is always an easier way
Suicide might punish one
But it will punish you
Suicide might look an answer
But it's only a problem

Chorus

Bridge
Don't even think about it
Don't even talk about it
Don't even pull the gun out
Don't even tie the noose up
It will only bring on temptation

Chorusx2

[Malson]

They're way too prose-like. It looks like you'd just be talking during the song.

[Forty]

Which one, there's two songs

[Malson]

They're way too prose-like. It looks like you'd just be talking during the song.

[JAP]

Bachyderm-san said it all.

Personally, Forcystus-san, I think they're better as prose than as yrics. I just started writing lyrics myself, but still, I agree completely with Bachyderm-san.

[Forty]

They're way too prose-like. It looks like you'd just be talking during the song.

Anyway, what's prose
I think I know, it's like...
when you just say something?

[JAP]

Exactly.

[Forty]

k, I would write more, but I cannot think

[JAP]

Take it easy.

[Malson]

k, I would write more, but I cannot think

You should try to use the same logic for posting.

[Leventhan]

k, I would write more, but I cannot think

You should try to use the same logic for posting.

Don't be so hard to Forcystus.
Just practice-lots.

[Forty]

He just doesn't like me.


And thanks for the comments everybody

[Malson]

I don't have anything against you. You're just terrible at posting.

[Forty]

Point made, thanks for clearing up.

Plus, whenever you point it out to me, I ask myself, what the hell was I thinking?