DEMO!! please mail me if bugs

ok so out of the blue i come around to post of a game i'c bin working on in RPG maker 2000, bin on it for some time.

right now working on:
spell items
evil world
ppl
spelling corrections
text ut offs

http://files.filefront.com/grawrzip/;9242968;/file  here is link, try it out and mail me at faygoking2001@hotmail.com for feedback / any bugs i missed and need to RAID them

Screenshots, story line and character bois is extremly important when you post your topics. People just don't download. They want to know if it's worthy to download it.

story line = juggalo world is under attack by a parrallell world, its up to link, mario, kirby, and vincent callintine to save the day. (its a short game so i'm not giveing away much)

as for screen shots its pretty much simple rpg maker 2000 stuff with the RTP 1.31 package

story line = juggalo world is under attack by a parrallell world, its up to link, mario, kirby, and vincent callintine to save the day. (its a short game so i'm not giveing away much)

as for screen shots its pretty much simple rpg maker 2000 stuff with the RTP 1.31 package

Screenshots tell more than a dozen words. Alot of people won't download a game without screenshots.

I'm one of them.

story line = juggalo world is under attack by a parrallell world, its up to link, mario, kirby, and vincent callintine to save the day. (its a short game so i'm not giveing away much)

as for screen shots its pretty much simple rpg maker 2000 stuff with the RTP 1.31 package

Even a short game needs a little deeper story. This is a typhical "Let's save the day" style of story, wich don't make me interested at all really.

Why is the Juggalo world attacked? Do they have something that the parrallell worlds wants, and what is the parrallell world?

Black Shadow is right, you need to go a little more in-depth about it, if you want to draw in people.
If you don't want to, then don't worry. Either way, you might want to, before the flamers come and getcha. 

They already have

*Kidding*