need someone to check out my new side view charas and rate them

[dollmage]

Well as the title said i need some good pointers and comments on this battlers. Not that i dont like them or anything it just eats my time not just consume lol, yes eat my time  ,their just taking FU#%*(# ( toooooo long to sprite them >.< even just the ready post so if its not a bother can any one please tell me if their good or if it needs some improvements, but not in the shading parts ok? coz i shaded them that way and those poses are just the regular ones so the i wont spoil the ready poses till i make a demo of my game =) so? here they are




so what yah guys think?

here is a larger version so it wont hurt your eye
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and here are the weapons do give comments... specialy on the axe it suck i know -,- not to flashy any tips how to make it cooler ?? and way way better


here is a larger version of the weapon
[spoiler][/spoiler]

[mercenarygirls]

Since you asked for c&c i'll be nitt-picky. But just so you know that upon first glance at these. I didn't notice anything to say either then "wow amazing" lol. So this is the one that was in your avatar before yes? I like this one a lot better! the pose is more dynamic and pleasing to the eye XD.

The girl, the bottom of her skirt confuses me. I'm not sure if it's supposed to it has two really long piece from the top part hanging down or if there their own separate pieces. It looks kinda cut off on the left side but attached on the right.

and the axe guy doesn't look like he's holding the axe just that it's placed over the sprite.

Either then that though... and i had to really look to catch those, if you didn't change them probably no one would notice. They're fantastic. I especially like the suit of armor on the axe guy!

[SirJackRex]

Very, very nice.

[Joaocarlos]

great as all ways but I think there is some edit to be done ...  like on the girl you should put some more colar on the hand because it looks like she is holding it with just one  finger
and on the axe guy put the hands on front of the axe xD lol

[dollmage]

yeah i did it preety quick on the axe as i said i didnt put the correct poses coz im gonna be using them on the game =) so any more tips aside from the poses?

well the skirt tnx for pointing that out yes it is a two layer. so its a bit hard to differenciate if its a two or just one huh ok ill fix that up =) tnx for the comments guys

[SirJackRex]

Do you use like blank models for making these? Or totally from scratch?

[dollmage]

well at first i use the white ties characters as tiemplate =), but for this guys I made it from scratch except for the head of the first guy its just a recolor and a few edits =p the one with the sword.

here is the fix female.... fix her skirt =)

so how does this look?
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and about the axe guy as i have said earlier i just post them this way so I wont be a spoiler showing what they actualy look like in the game =) when they fight or in their ready poses =) so it would be a suprise =)

[Joaocarlos]

much better 

[Yoruichi Shihoin]

the Sword Is Fine, But The Battle Axe Needs.... Something, and i think the staff needs a complete remake Lol
like the sword tho!   

[dollmage]

hmmm yeah the axe need that something but i dont know what that something is too 

and what should i do with the stuff? i cant think of any? but i know that the from the handle to the bottom end it needs a lil. amp.

[mercenarygirls]

i think your skirt looks great now. and i like all you weapons. nothing i can find wrong. Infact the axe is my favorite.

[dollmage]

i think your skirt looks great now. and i like all you weapons. nothing i can find wrong. Infact the axe is my favorite.

thanks ,

[ChaosSoldier92]

THey Look Amazing itz just as the other guy said they dnt look like there holding it.....like the thumb should b behind the weapon not infront...nd thatz just minor...,BUT itz hot

[dollmage]

THey Look Amazing itz just as the other guy said they dnt look like there holding it.....like the thumb should b behind the weapon not infront...nd thatz just minor...,BUT itz hot

tnx sorry to lazy to fix that coz i have a different ready post asside from that what im trying to asked is some improvement on their looks say if he needs more hair a bit of shading or stuff like that or it need his armor to be more bulky

[ChaosSoldier92]

no prob ill still giv it a ten

THey Look Amazing itz just as the other guy said they dnt look like there holding it.....like the thumb should b behind the weapon not infront...nd thatz just minor...,BUT itz hot

tnx sorry to lazy to fix that coz i have a different ready post asside from that what im trying to asked is some improvement on their looks say if he needs more hair a bit of shading or stuff like that or it need his armor to be more bulky

[Winged]

The axe could use a bigger curve but apart from that, everything deserves a 10 out of 10 ^^

The sword is awesome btw ^^

~Winged

[dollmage]

The axe could use a bigger curve but apart from that, everything deserves a 10 out of 10 ^^

The sword is awesome btw ^^

~Winged

curve on the blade part ok oh yeah do i need to make it large? and do i need to add a few stuff on the end of the axe?

[Karo Rushe]

10/10

bI like them a lot...specially the Sword.

[dollmage]

Thanks this is a new battler what do you think of her?


this one will be for sharing

[blazinhandle]

Nothing short of amazing *as usual*

[Joaocarlos]

nice work

but the leg of the 1º one this a little odd

try to ben offer the knee

[dollmage]

nice work

but the leg of the 1º one this a little odd

try to ben offer the knee

you mean? the first move.? that's ok i tried to animate it and i dont see anything but,  i made that by accident, when i try to fix it and see how it animate it looks weird so i kept it that way lol