[Visual] Random pic

Link · May 10, 2007, 05:21:12 PM

i got bored in my science lesson, and drew this, so what dose people think

biohazard · May 10, 2007, 07:37:34 PM

I hate everything but the wings.

Deliciously_Saucy · May 10, 2007, 07:38:45 PM

Quote from: biohazard on May 10, 2007, 07:37:34 PM
I hate everything but the wings.

Sadly I have to agree.

biohazard · May 10, 2007, 07:41:06 PM

I think you have drawing talent, but just don't upload sketches you did when you were bored, as they usually aren't good.

Moss. · May 10, 2007, 08:06:10 PM

since it is a sketch, and not a finished product, i'll lay sheer drawing talent aside

but sadly, I'm not really digging the concept of the drawing, either. The suit's kinda gay, and green hair with wings was already done in Escaflowne. And the whole angel thing is really getting cliche, sadly. =\

biohazard · May 10, 2007, 08:28:05 PM

But devil wings are just as cliche.

Kokowam · May 10, 2007, 09:21:14 PM

I'm trying to ignore the stuff in the bottom right corner because no me gusta. The tree is pretty decent... The wings looks nice but yes, cliche.

Cliches can be good sometimes.

You shoulda just given him normal, ASIAN XD, black hair. And not as emo with the shadowing over his eyes. Somethings look disproportional to me and his feet are just kind of awkward.

On the other hand, if this was when you were bored, gj! I could probably not draw like that. Also, you're your own critic so just say "stfu" to everyone in your mind (that's important) and then try your best. I'd love to see your real artwork.

haloOfTheSun · May 10, 2007, 09:27:40 PM

I don't like the suit at all, but I'll be original here and mention something else: I don't like the hairstyle either. And there's something about his face that bothers me.

Still, it's better than I could do.

Link · May 10, 2007, 09:38:59 PM

WOO critics lol, and yeah only reason i done the wings was because i was bored, i normally do dark suit, black hair ect. and too mastermoo the only proper art i got is my coursework for art lol, but if i do a proper one i shall upload and expect more tips

Link · May 12, 2007, 01:47:24 PM

another pic i drew lol, i get really bored, not as good as the first in my opinion though

Lavata · May 12, 2007, 02:06:07 PM

It's pretty good...it's just that:
-His face is too......o.O slanted. HIs ear is also a tad too small.
-Arms are too skiny compared to the rest of him. He goes from broad to stick-figure-esque.
-Thumb wayy to small on the right hand.
-His hair just looks like it's laying ontop of his head istead of growing from it.

Thats basically it from me. Other than that, keep going. They are pretty nice, and I can see them getting better eventually.

thebmagic · May 12, 2007, 02:26:50 PM

Quote from: Lavata on May 12, 2007, 02:06:07 PM
It's pretty good...it's just that:
-His face is too......o.O slanted. HIs ear is also a tad too small.
-Arms are too skiny compared to the rest of him. He goes from broad to stick-figure-esque.
-Thumb wayy to small on the right hand.
-His hair just looks like it's laying ontop of his head istead of growing from it.

Thats basically it from me. Other than that, keep going. They are pretty nice, and I can see them getting better eventually.

Yeah, definitely. But don't fret. That's how we grow. Through constructive criticism!

The best way to vastly improve the above mentioned features is to do either of these:
Go to your local library and pick up a book on "Drawing angles/perspective"
OR
Look up a tutorial online about those.

I'm serious. You'd be surprised how much better you will draw when you gain just the slighter experience in the angle aspect.

,
~ B-Magic

Link · May 14, 2007, 05:01:23 PM

Heres some of my proper art, and a cookie for who can guess who the male is.

shadowdude · May 16, 2007, 06:20:41 PM

Its Dante... i want a cookie tomorrow at school or im gonna kick you in the balls.

Link · May 16, 2007, 07:33:05 PM

Cheat you asked me at school, no cookie for you.

shadowdude · May 16, 2007, 09:06:39 PM

did i or did i not tell you who the person was??? thar ye gooo then... cookie or dead balls, your choice... and make another picture for me

Link · May 17, 2007, 06:21:54 AM

Fiiiine, even though i already gave you one.

kid27 · May 18, 2007, 07:07:05 AM

I like your drawings.
Work on them more and more and more and you will surely be a really good artist.
I can't say I can draw so much better, anyways.
And a tip I always find helps me out is: take your time.
I am always surprised at how impatient I am.
I always think everything good comes when you rush...
But really, take your time and use that eraser as much as you need.
And keep practicing!
A guitar teacher once told me there are 5 ways to learn guitar better (or anything for that matter):
1) Practice
2) Practice
3) Practice
4) Practice
5) Practice
That is definitely true. "An artist is nothing without the talent, but the talent is nothing without work". -Some old/dead dude. xD