[Music] I POOPED A SONG

[Nightwolf]

LOL.
yeah, i made this song like, 6 months ago, then jappy pmed me, so i send her an edited version of this song.
So i'm just posting the edited version


Leave comments or you're dog will feel it.

[Blizzard]

Nice! I like it.
EDIT:
Hey, try using different notes at the end. It sounds a bit weird.

[Arrow]

VERY nice. You are constantly improving, this is much better than your last.

[Nightwolf]

LUCKILY I TOLD YOU TO LEAVE COMMENTS OR YOU WOULDNT, HUH? 

Thanks for the comments, and will do, Sire Blizzard Damned Scripter Sire!

[modern algebra]

I liked it Nightwolf. Very catchy

[Nightwolf]

Geee thanks, but i seriously am waiting for Halo,Silver, Holk and especially Zypher to reply.

THEY USUALLY CORRECT MY MISTAKES U C

[Holkeye]

Sounds good. Throw a little bass guitar behind it, and fix the few wrong notes there are toward the end and it will be perfect.

[ataraxy2]

The notes on the flute seem to go offtune, fix that and add a backing and it'd be really nice. You are good at making nice melodies and if you work somemore this could be cool.

[Nightwolf]

Thanks, i'll try to improve it

<3 all but ataraxy, you little whore you  XD

[JAP]

Wow, the name is still Jappy? I am honored.
I've told you my thoughts, right? <3

[Nightwolf]

Lol yeah, and thanks for being honoured

it's a rare thing in my case ;-;

[Arrow]

Ah, well as you continue I'm sure some awesome music is going to come out of you.

[haloOfTheSun]

It's just too bad it actually does come OUT of him. 

[Deliciously_Saucy]

Oh my, Nightwolf's in love.

Very good, agree with the critique.

[Master_of_Time]

Not bad, dude. Very catchy.
My only issue is that, like some of my own songs, it get's kind of repetetive. (did I spell that right?)

[JAP]

Oh my, Nightwolf's in love.

Very good, agree with the critique.

Nightwolf's in LOVE? O.o
With who?