[Music] Re-Perplexus

So... I've got some pretty nice "ammount" of inspiration yesterday and I was able to almost finish a once barely started song.
It's supposed to be a remix version of a much older song. I mainly did it, because I liked the bassline. Anyway, here's the song. I've also put up the old version for you to compare. Since I don't consider it finished yet, any suggestions how to make it better (except the overfading parts that were obviously poorly made)?
And yeah... Keep in mind that I was doing the entire master mix down on my head phones instead of using speakers, so I might have messed it up a little bit. (-_-')

Blizzard - Re-Perplexus (4:25 on 192kbps = 6.365.771 bytes = 6.07MB)
Blizzard - Perplexus (5:41 on 128kbps = 5.464.619 bytes = 5.21MB)

BTW, I have listened to it 14 times in a row yesterday AFTER rendering it to an mp3. := Actually it's odd that I listened to a song only so few times after rendering it... := := :=

EDIT:
Added the finished version. It's way better than the one before.

It's a great song, but the fact that it was made by you totaly ruins that.
Lol jk, its good.

The more often I listen to it, the more I dislike it. I seriously need to improve it.

no you don't. dude, that's freakin' awesome!
Two thumbs way up! 

What program did you use to make this?

FruityLoops like always. Yeah, it's not that bad, but I can improve it.

EDIT:
I was working on it yesterday again and I improved it a lot. I didn't need to do much on it. Try out the finished version, you will surely like it more than the one I posted a few days ago. (~_^)d

Wow man, WOW.
Okay time for truth, i didn;t hear your song as i was busy and forgot the other day.
Okay i didnt forget, but just didnt feel like it.

AND NOW I DID WOOOO.
And it's seriously a good song man, as i told/am gonna tell you on the irc.

Thanks, I appreciated it. ^__^

So... I've got some pretty nice "ammount" of inspiration yesterday and I was able to almost finish a once barely started song.
It's supposed to be a remix version of a much older song. I mainly did it, because I liked the bassline. Anyway, here's the song. I've also put up the old version for you to compare. Since I don't consider it finished yet, any suggestions how to make it better (except the overfading parts that were obviously poorly made)?
And yeah... Keep in mind that I was doing the entire master mix down on my head phones instead of using speakers, so I might have messed it up a little bit. (-_-')

Blizzard - Re-Perplexus (4:25 on 192kbps = 6.365.771 bytes = 6.07MB)
Blizzard - Perplexus (5:41 on 128kbps = 5.464.619 bytes = 5.21MB)

BTW, I have listened to it 14 times in a row yesterday AFTER rendering it to an mp3. := Actually it's odd that I listened to a song only so few times after rendering it... := := :=

EDIT:
Added the finished version. It's way better than the one before.

I easily prefer Perplexus, it's so much better. Although Re-Perplexus has more going on and is better quality Perplexus gives off a cool feel. Together they take 11 MB of my iPod. Oh and these two are probably your best songs - so catchy and mellow dramatic. Dammit - did you start good?

I guess, lol!
Ever since Break the Silence my stuff just sounds way better than earlier.

*gets jealous of Blizzard's skill*

 

Although the stuff you make wouldn't involve the same work as IDM. Now that'd be awesome - you making something other than Trance. Not gonna happen? Dammit. At least I tried.

Blizzard = The Multi Talented Ice