[Sorry to double-post, I hate double-posting, but this is a major update]
I've re-done many parts of the story, the characters, added bios, etc.
Story:
My detailed Story: Cadoria ia a peacefull empire on an island in the middle of the western sea. For 200 years, they have been alone. Any of the daring sailors or adventuerers that find this place are not allowed to leave. Cadoria stands to protect the world, but the stories lie underneath.
The story begins as Prince Rindar(you) is right outside the castle of his glorious citidel. Yoshiro, his trainer and teacher, tells him that the dreaded Warbrood is coming... After leaving you citidel by a small boat, you awaken on a beach. You don't know where it is, you don't know anything about it, all you know is that you have to find a town nearby... You eventually meet Samuel, a pirate working for a kingdom known as Rynel...
As you venture forward, you learn more about this new land, and more about the hatred of the Warbrood...
Characters:
-Rindar Bravecrest- Age 18 - Two-Handed Swords
The young, outgoing prince of Cadoria. He's not like most princes, who see their subjects as commoners. Rindar sees his subjects as friends, and hopes to protect them. But ewhen he learns of Cadoria's fate, he goes into a sort of depression. His main plot is to find out what happened to Cadoria, and o his friends and family.
-Blair Bladewing- Age 18 - Daggers and Knives
A young thief from... well, know one really knows! He steals only for survival, and hardly ever or his own profit. Known to other theives as a runt, and known to the poor as a sort of Robin Hood. He meets Rindar when he is running from a dark elf, who tried to use an orb as a lethal weapon.
-Natalie Spiritwind- Age 17 - Bows
A beautiful Sky Mage of Maelglade. She meets Rindar and Blair when they sneak into Saint Macabre's Cathedral to speak to some people... Natalie is often curious, and also emotional at times, but often conceals that due to her own father's stallwart nature.
-Abel Purebook- Age 16 - Staves and Rods
When the Woodland Priests were almost destroyed due to an inside job, they made sure that their order of roaming priests would be protected. Every 10 years, the High Priest would select a successor, most likely the hier would be his son or another member of his bloodline. The youngest member of this roaming group is Abel, the grandson of Kiodi Purebook, the current High Priest. Abel meets the trio as he is sent on an exile for a crim e he didn't commit.
Chronicles of Grimskull features WILL include:
-A rank system- The more sidequests you do, the higher your rank.(easy)
-Secrets- The higher your rank, the more secrets!(easy)
-Steal System- Blair will be able to steal from and Mug enemies.(moderate)
-Door System- Items that teleport you to all towns will be available(easy)
These MAY be incoporated (they may not be needed):
Blacksmithing VS Banking- Create your own weapons at special Blacksmiths. If black smithing is not added, maybe banking. Why just one? Because if I had both, that would be overused, and it'd make the game way to easy.
Stocks- Harder to make, but stocks may be incorporated.