[Musics] I'm stuck.

[Moss.]

So I'm writing this to be a kind of alternative waltz, and the part where I leave off is supposed to be the heavy chorus, but I can't come up with anything. 



I start out in Bb Minor, and by the time I get to the chorus I'm in C minor. Maybe what's killing this for me is the key change. =\


Any opinions or ideas?

[Nightwolf]

LOL, i can't find any bad things, but then again, I'm not good at it.

I suppose if the volume would get louder, it'd sound HEAVY

Or if you add another hard instrument or play the piano which you stopped....