The new End area is very nice... may be if yyou cut area's of the girls voice, "like Blood and Wine" and repeat it faintly over the area from 3:05 mins to 4:00 May be added some Echo to the cut up sample, and lower its tone, like blend it into the base, like a faint wisper just to carry the theme... The actual end is good and the track seems finished, you should enter it in Nouman6's Comp... It betters my Entry...LOL
Its great the way it is... But I love the vocals... 4:15 onwards is very mello, love it... Infact the Music only version is very trippy and relaxing...
But the Vocal makes it memerable and gives your tune that extra lift... It could make a great back ground track for a Mobile phone add, or a Wish you where here epsiode abroad... its a Lovely tune... (I never use the word LOVELY...YUK... that in its self its a MASSIVE compliment).