First of all,
make that 29.6mb BGM named Untitled a mp3/ogg for god's sake When downloading it I was like whooa almost 40mb of demo, this' gonna be huge. And then I open the folder and 3/4 of the size is one single song :p Great song though, did you guys record it yourself? Anyhow, get a mp3/ogg converter and change the format, heheh. Wav = huge.
I'm just gonna trot down things here:
(I understand that this is just a demo, so things are still just on their sketches; so if you were planning any of these for the final then simply ignore it
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-The 'everything' option only leads to credits, then it goes back to main menu.
-This is a personal preference thing, but I think it's more natural if you set the door teleport trigger to player touch or event touch instead of action key.
-Also a personal preference thing, the rooms are too large and hence tend to appear empty. It doesn't have to take up the entire minimum map (20x15).
-Yay I caught a frog
-Can't seem to go anywhere
But m'k, me go try puzzles
-Yay got the fire gloves. Dunno how though, followed the <-- --> <- -> order but then the thing closed and I had to messed around with deactivating and stuff.
-#(*@$&@*)*%^@)(!$_(*$@&%*@)%*&@%*!_($&$@'ing fall-through holes.
-Oh okay you only need one of them fire rock thingies.
-Hah-hah cave master is a dragonfly.
-zomg not the credits again ><
-Trying out battle.
-It's kinda hard to fight when the guy can out damage your healing even when that's all you do :/ In my opinion, boss fights shouldn't be hard in the aspect of huge damage huge hp, but of making more interesting attacks that take somewhat of a strategic thinking. For example, chain-resulting skills, flurry rapid hits, etc.
-M'kay, that's pretty much it. Note that I've mostly just pointed things out that (in my personal opinion) could be improved. Of course there are good things, I liked that puzzle part especially. So good job overall, and keep the above things considered (ignore the useless comments). The major thing to be improved here would be the maps, but I think it's mainly cause it's just a demo that you didn't pay attention to them anyhow. So, cha~ Good luck on progress.