Haze of darkness , demo released! (link fixed, it works now)

UPDATE! DEMO RELEESED!

behold! the mighty version 0.1!! http://www.megaupload.com/?d=R2BHT5LZ
WARNING!!! MAY BE EXTREEMLY BUGGY!!!

First off Hi, I'm new to these boards, I found out about Crankeye via Rios-Ent and so here I am.
Anyway I recently started a new project on RMXP which is currently called Haze of Darkness but the name may evently be changed

Story

Nick and Jakob, two travelers, are searching for a place to set up camp, they eventuly find a nice area by a small lake whicfh they discover is also the home of two forest goblins, after clearing these a stranger come in and tells them to meet him at the WillowVale (working name) inn the next day, after pitching up the tent Jakob has an odd dream, the story unfolds from there on.

Charectars

Name: Jakob Sizarich
Gender: Male
Class: Fighter
Age: 16
Picture:

Name:Nick Sekurea
Gender: Male
Class: Thief
Age: 17
Picture:

Name: Vyre Von Belldon (not certain of name, may change)
Gender: Male
Class: Thief
Age: 19
Picture:

Name: General DaarMeant
Gender: Male
Class: Cleric
Age: 55
Picture:

Name: Commander MoonBrook
Gender: Male
Class: Lancer
Age: 32
Picture:


Name: King IronsWorth
Gender: Male
Class: Noble
Age: 43
Picture:

Thoughs are the current charectars, more will be added as the game gets bigger.

Screenshots










If anyones wondering where the battlers came from it's http://translate.google.com/translate?u=http%3A%2F%2Fnaramura.kdn.ne.jp%2F&langpair=ja%7Cen&hl=en&ie=UTF-8&oe=UTF-8&prev=%2Flanguage_tools.
thanks for your time, tell me what you think so far please 

thanks for your time, tell me what you think so far please 

well, not much to tell from...lol..but looks like a good start. I see that the screenshots are comming so I will wait and tell you my thought on them

hope this game works out, good luck! 

Just added screenshots, demos almost ready too 

Other than a couple of errors with mapping, they look good love the battler sprites! Awesomeness!

your mapping looks good for just starting. You should look into reading some mapping tutorials

hmm your maps either look too busy or too empty. make the inside houses a little smaller so they dont look too empty or too big. looks nice overall. you also have a grammar error with the farmer. if u want him to say head east...blah blah blah you'd put the ' before ed like 'ed east... sorry. im a spelling grammar person. i dunno, just bothering me lol

Whew.

okay, good job in not using the RTP battlers. However..Do NOT use Arshes' sprite. If you do, youre otherwise possibly (i havent played it to know for sure) game will be shunned and ruined by the use of it.
Just a warning.

As Christina said, a few map errors.

I would try to use some other non-rtp stuff, btw.

Whew.

okay, good job in not using the RTP battlers. However..Do NOT use Arshes' sprite. If you do, youre otherwise possibly (i havent played it to know for sure) game will be shunned and ruined by the use of it.
Just a warning.

As Christina said, a few map errors.

I would try to use some other non-rtp stuff, btw.

Why would my game be shunned for using arshes sprites? i thuink they look cool and so far your the opnly one who said anything negative bout them, but if you think that it would wreck the game can you hook me up with some new ones? i only know about arshes ones and they look good in my opinon.

I am aware of map errors but they will eventuly get fixed in the fine tuning stage of game making, the demos almost ready, just need to finish StoneWood city and fix up certain areas.

umm...

www.crankeye.com the homepage has spirits..

Well yeah but they all look a tad too standerd exept the guy on the horse, and i don't need a guy on a horse 

...Mapping needs work in the interiors and some exteriors and there are some minor spelling errors, might wanna check through the screens and check out some mapping tuts. The story is fine and all, no problems there I guess, its all coming along nicely.

~Winged

DEMO RELEASED! WHOOO I'm still a newbie to the forum and I've already released a demo!

Nice game, I like the themes, and the scrennies. However, could you upload the game on Megaupload?

www.megaupload.com

The current one doesn't work, for me.

Ok uplaoding it with megaupload...taking a damn long time though! if this is how long the demo taes I don't want to know how long the FULL games gonna' take!

You've uploaded just the "game.exe" in RS...
So no one can play it.

Or just compound the game data, in RPG Maker, and upload that. It doesn't take long. Well, it didnt with me.

ok i put all the graphics, system and whatnot into 1 file and uploaded that in megaupload, ill get rid of the broken rapidshare one.

Thanks, downloading now.

I like it. I acually already had it...im confused.