I've been working on a game for a few months now with RPG Maker XP. I had the title "Tales of Retribution," but then after reading a topic, I noticed that the world "Tales" isn't good to use for a game title. So now I'm trying to pick a new title for my game.

The game is about a swordsman named Kosuke. He's a farmer in a town that's in the middle of the woods. While he's cleaning his closet, he finds a diary that belonged to his friend Alyn, who went missing several years ago. After finding some clues, and gaining other friends, he searches for her. Little does he know her huge secret. There's also a strange rumor going around of people disappearing and a girl with wings wandering about.

The story does have angels in it, which is why the title page has a girl angel on it. The game also has to do with deceit and retribution. Which of these titles sounds good? And flames, criticism, comments, etc are very welcome for the title and summary of the storyline.

Deceiving You
Discord of Retribution
A Broken Angel
Faltered Perfection

Any others is fine, too. Thanks!

I'm going to be honest. I think 'Deceiving You' is a pretty interesting title.

Really? Thanks! I was thinking of doing that one, but then I wasn't sure. If no one else comments, then I'll make the game title screen thingy.

I agree with Holk.
It sounds interesting and quick, and does make it sound like there could be an interesting story behind it.

Thank-you for the comments. I think "Deceiving You" is catchy, too. I just need to hurry up and finalize the storyline 

Deceiving You definitely gets my interest.

So I'm gonna jump on the bandwagon and agree with these two. But ultimately, go for what feels right for you.

Deceiving You is fine with me. It ties in with the storyline and seems catchy :3 Now I just need to finish up the plot x3

Deceiving You. It definitely sounds like there could be a great storyline that revolves around it.