Outpost
The dwarven leaders held counsel recently, discussing what they had recently found. Although they are uncertain as to exactly what the stone is, they know it's powerful. They want to harness its energies, but the only people that understand this natural magic are the Elven people. Years of racial tension and warfare between the two cultures make this a difficult situation. The humans are driven by greed, as they often are. They are siding with the elves because they know if the elves get it, then they will reap the benefits as well.
The tensions are getting higher, and though war has not yet been declared between any of the factions, it is undoubtedly coming. The arms race has been building, leaving the economies on both sides struggling. With trade routes both on land and in the sea slowly being taken over by equipment caravans and soldiers, towns and shops aren't getting the things that they need. Even the townspeople are being affected, which is just more fuel to the fire.
Credits
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Development and design by Max R
| SYSTEM |
Engine - RPGMXP
ABS Battle System - Blizzard
Advanced Time and Environment System (ATES) - Blizzard
"Tons of Addons" system - Blizzard
Inventory Organization System - Albertfish
| GRAPHICS |
Original icons - Ails
Additional icons - Max R
Spriting - Jordan C
| STORY |
Max R
Jordan C
ps; always looking for more, PM me if you're interested
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Features
[spoiler] >> Full ABS system, bosses and critters alike
>> The world will react to your actions, while staying balanced
>> Reputation will play a large part in the story
>> Different characters will have different storylines
>> Main questline as well as numerous sidequests
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>> Profit[/spoiler]
Characters
[spoiler] Haven't started workin' on them quiet yet, trying to finish up the storyline first. :[ Sorrys [/spoiler]
Screenshots
[spoiler]Photobucket is down right now D:[/spoiler]
So yeah, I'm still tryin to finish up the storyline and stuff, but here's my thread! :D
Edit [ Jan 12 ] : Changed up the story a bit
Edit [ Jan 14 ] : More to the story
World of RPGMakercraft?
Quote from: NAMKCOR on January 14, 2010, 08:59:47 AM
World of RPGMakercraft?
xD lmao no, no, no.
I hate that if you use those races and anything having to do with a war or conflict, everyones like "omg warcraft!" :p
No, not World of RPGMakercraft. haha
Except your story is well...pretty much just that.
I really don't see anything to differentiate it from the world of warcraft 'alliance versus horde' storyline at all.
they exist and they're fighting, try explaining why, maybe how it started, something unique to your game rather than just a general idea that looks exactly like World of RPGMakercraft.
alright I changed it around a bit :]
Is it a bit better now? I know it still needs work, but how am I doin' so far? haha
Much better. Usually my stories are like "In the world of boxes, Bob found a rock".
haha I like rocks! :D And boxes! So that story sounds great :p
Maybe with the last sentence "The humans, who are on the side of the elves, want to use the stone for themselves, as do the orcs." make it more in detail... why are the humans with the elves? If only the elves know the magic, why dont the factions ficht to parlay with the elves? something like that(or something)
I know it sounds like I'm taking back my first post, but I'm not. All I'm saying now is that before that last sentence everything was sweet. After needs a bit more explaination. ;8
Added a bit to the story, more detail about why the humans want to help the elves
Sweet. I can't wait to see the game.
Well I cant wait till a demo is ready :p
but its far from that point still :]