this is my freeroam RPG called skarvelia(even though lal my games are freeroam).here is the demo http://megaupload.com/?d=LXLTVHIU
the story
you start off as a pirate on a ship in the middle of the sea,there is a huge storm and the waves are thrashing
against the ship,your captain is hit by a wave and is swept out to sea,the same thing happens to you,your eyes close
and you're in complete darkness,when you wake up you're on a strange island...
the characters
name:(you get to choose the name)
gender:(you get to choose the gender)
age:21
bio:he/she lived their life as a pirate until washing up on a strange island changed his/her life forever
name:captain ovado
gender:male
age:48
bio:ovado jesfel had been a pirate since he was 3,when his father was attacked and killed,ovado took over
the ship,the deadly siren.
more characters to come soon...
features
you get options of what to say
character creation
different style battlers
house system
the ability to kick people out of your party
screenshots
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keep watching for more updates and for the next version...
Screenshots?
Quote from: Rasse on September 13, 2009, 10:27:51 AM
Screenshots?
dunno how,lol,anyway,trust me,it's awesomeness
God fucking dammit, I don't even know where to begin with this.
Let's start with the obvious messed up format. Why oh why did you space your text out like that? I can't even tell if you were trying to center it or just felt like throwing in a shitload of spaces for no reason. Either way, it's annoying as hell. Next is your god awful spelling and general grammar. The only capital letters you used in the whole thing was to say RPG. Capitalize the first letter of every sentence, capitalize the first letter of a name, put a space after your commas, periods, and colons, and add a period to the end of your sentences. Just for starters.
To take a screenshot, just hold Shift and press the Print Screen button. This copies whatever's on your screen at that exact moment, and will allow you to paste it into your favorite image editor like MS Paint or something. This is important because I refuse to download any demo that does not have these. Who knows what crap you could put in there? It might be a virus or just a plain old shitty game, which it honestly is sounding like it is.
Everything Zylos said. If you want us to play your game, post some screenshots and fix up the format and English skills. Because to be honest, no one would download a game with messed up lines and nothing to see at all.
Judging the content, though, you really should add more to your characters more than just a sentence. And the story is not detailed at all and is very old and cliched, although the idea of pirates in RPGs is a little rare. Seriously, work on your topic and maybe people will care to look then.
I always download games with crappy grammar and no screenshots. They're usually really, really hilarious and bad. I was just expecting him to pull another Billybulltwat or Gate of Light on us but eh guess not :(
Anyways, shit game. Yeah, no criticism.
look asshole,u don't know if it's crap unless you play it
They're talking about how your topic is crap, not your game.
Which I am speculating will be crap as well.
Quote from: Zylos on September 13, 2009, 02:40:26 PM
God fucking dammit, I don't even know where to begin with this.
My little Zylos is growing up to be just like Anski. ;8
how do i do full screen? i wann od full screen on my game to take screenshots
ur stoooopid
Quote from: grafikal on September 13, 2009, 07:08:34 PM
your stupid.
see,u always delibarately start arguments,if no-one tells me how to do full screen i can't take screenshots can i?
Alt + Print Screen will do it if it's windowed. Also I did download your game.
There's a RMXP Help File.
Come on, this is the basic of the basics. Alt + Enter for fullscreen, Shift + Print Screen for a screenshot of the whole screen, Alt + Print Screen for a screenshot of just the current focused program. Fullscreen doesn't really matter though, your fullscreen screenshots would be the same size as a regular screenshot, so there's little point in using that as an excuse.
And if you think I'm an asshole, you really haven't seen the rest of RMRK bud.
So is this the GIANT PROJECT you were talking about?
Quote from: Lazer Kirby on September 13, 2009, 07:51:43 PM
So is this the GIANT PROJECT you were talking about?
no,but did u play it?
No, I haven't. I don't really have the time to.
...I am so amazed and in awe with this game.
SCREENSHOTS:
Best dialog EVER:
[spoiler](https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg178.imageshack.us%2Fimg178%2F7594%2Fbestgameever1.png&hash=f5c74a99e7771508dba8749910b9c4492140ed34)(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg19.imageshack.us%2Fimg19%2F7168%2Fbestgameever2.png&hash=6b22c957c820a0dea0c59bc377adaf3ce88e68ce)[/spoiler]
Best MAPPING EVER:
[spoiler](https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg178.imageshack.us%2Fimg178%2F2867%2Fbestgameever3.png&hash=0687983b675d4b6f5acd459b3c1523a98dc6978b)[/spoiler]
Best Battle System...Ever...
[spoiler](https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg15.imageshack.us%2Fimg15%2F9824%2Fbestgameever4.png&hash=2f32e3af63cb11707d7977c7f42f6f765fdf748f)(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg222.imageshack.us%2Fimg222%2F4226%2Fbestgameever6.png&hash=3faa04fab1ba7989c33dcfa900808b1673db0b65)(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg178.imageshack.us%2Fimg178%2F9241%2Fbestgameever5.png&hash=d40532d94055fb988057e92a1b07773718333cbb)[/spoiler]
Don't bother with this amazing game.
.... LOL
Quote from: Lazer Kirby on September 13, 2009, 08:58:40 PM
Redwyn, all but one of your images are broken.
LOL BATTLE SYSTEM LOL
Fixed, sorry. Imageshack is getting shittier and shittier. :\
Quote from: Redwyn on September 13, 2009, 08:49:02 PM
...I am so amazed and in awe with this game.
SCREENSHOTS:
Best dialog EVER:
[spoiler](https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg178.imageshack.us%2Fimg178%2F7594%2Fbestgameever1.png&hash=f5c74a99e7771508dba8749910b9c4492140ed34)(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg19.imageshack.us%2Fimg19%2F7168%2Fbestgameever2.png&hash=6b22c957c820a0dea0c59bc377adaf3ce88e68ce)[/spoiler]
Best MAPPING EVER:
[spoiler](https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg178.imageshack.us%2Fimg178%2F2867%2Fbestgameever3.png&hash=0687983b675d4b6f5acd459b3c1523a98dc6978b)[/spoiler]
Best Battle System...Ever...
[spoiler](https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg15.imageshack.us%2Fimg15%2F9824%2Fbestgameever4.png&hash=2f32e3af63cb11707d7977c7f42f6f765fdf748f)(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg222.imageshack.us%2Fimg222%2F4226%2Fbestgameever6.png&hash=3faa04fab1ba7989c33dcfa900808b1673db0b65)(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg178.imageshack.us%2Fimg178%2F9241%2Fbestgameever5.png&hash=d40532d94055fb988057e92a1b07773718333cbb)[/spoiler]
Don't bother with this amazing game.
I am so amazed! D:
....
No, seriously. And you call us assholes?
Quote from: phillip1756 on September 13, 2009, 07:19:24 PM
Quote from: grafikal on September 13, 2009, 07:08:34 PM
your stupid.
see,u always delibarately start arguments,if no-one tells me how to do full screen i can't take screenshots can i?
I wasn't arguing. I was calling you stupid. Stupid-head.
I'm trying to make this juvenile. So that it's more entertaining :)
[spoiler]You're still a whiner-puss :mad:[/spoiler]
[spoiler=screenshots]these screenshots
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are much better than what you posted Redwyn. I think you need to double-check the game you downloaded buddy, cause those are wrong :mad: :V[/spoiler]
Whoa, I'm sorry, and I thought i was a horrible mapper... You should work on your grammer too. Have you seen any maps on this site? Do they look like what you have created? Hellllll no. You should try a little, no, a lot harder with your mapping...
He should try harder to not be a poopy-face
Quote from: grafikal on September 13, 2009, 10:33:28 PM
He should try harder to not be a poopy-face
Agreed. But aren't we getting off topic with this...?
It's criticism. Like, he should stop trying to format his posts if he doesn't know how. He should learn to post screenshots correctly. He should stop calling respected forum members assholes or eventually he'll get his ass chewed out by a raging robot, try learning grammar, stop being a whiney bitch, look at successful RPG XP games and learn how they map or pick up something from them, read and participate in tutorials to get better, learn to write stories, or in general learn the BARE BASICS of the program he's trying to use to make games. I think this last thing I listed should be the most important because if he doesn't understand shit about the program then it's impossible to help and explain anything to the kid if he doesn't understand the most basic terminology of the program. Oh, he should look at that topic because I know there's at least 1 topic that does that. He should also learn follow the rules of how to request things or post them in the right place or both. Both would be nice.
Granted, some of what I just said wasn't criticism, but still good points to be made for him.
[spoiler]He's still a cheese-whiz :mad:[/spoiler]
Soo true, if he thinks this is amazing then he has another thing coming... He really should go and look at other peoples projects, or even a mapping tutorial...
Let's refrain from calling people poopy-faces, we are not third graders.
Mostly.
Fuck you guys, I brought graham crackers today.
Quote from: grafikal on September 13, 2009, 10:25:02 PM
I'm trying to make this juvenile. So that it's more entertaining :)
:)
You know, being new to the forums and all, I'm glad my project AT LEAST met the requirements for posting...
You guys are so brutal, it's awesome.
Well, this kid has history for being a i'm not allowed to name call anymore :mad:
you know what? fuck u guys,i don't need all this,next version im posting on facebook so my friends who aren't all shitfaced cocksuckers can play it,so all of shut the fuck up you cunts,and my grammar is bad coz im only year 7
...only year 7? You mean you're only seven years old?
Quote from: Zylos on September 15, 2009, 04:47:51 PM
...only year 7? You mean you're only seven years old?
no,year 7 at school,u wang
I don't claim to know how the education system works in your country, but looking it up, wouldn't being year seven make you about 11 or 12 and thusly too young to even be on this forum in the first place?
Umm I am at year 9, and my English is decent, I think. I used to post on forums when I was year 7, though, and everyone thought my English was good. That was because I wanted to learn, and I welcomed criticism, not called everyone fags, wangs and told them to fuck off.
Seriously, instead of insulting us because we want to help you improve, listen to us.
well u can all be much nicer in the way u say things,don't be wankers
WANKERSS!!!! GAHHH YOU GUYS SUCKK!!!11!!! ALKHOSDFKAH WAHHH
@philip1756 - just take it easy kid, and pay attention...it's not easy to absorb the truth,
even when it's exactly the opposite of what you wanted to hear.
you are still learning..................................................learn from it.
if you're going to make games then the first thing you need to do is...
"stop making games for yourself, aim to please the player"
luckily your thread hasn't been ignored and you've been given honest feedback
from experienced members of the forum "free of charge"
instead of having an attitude and losing your cool from loaded comments that aren't so nice...
you should challenge yourself to impress everyone the next time you decide to post your work.
earn that respect and compliments for maximum effort.
~g
*fix the terrain id for your tribal cave... the actor can walk anywhere...
Quote from: gameface101 on September 15, 2009, 05:54:49 PM
@philip1756 - just take it easy kid, and pay attention...it's not easy to absorb the truth,
even when it's exactly the opposite of what you wanted to hear.
you are still learning..................................................learn from it.
if you're going to make games then the first thing you need to do is...
"stop making games for yourself, aim to please the player"
luckily your thread hasn't been ignored and you've been given honest feedback
from experienced members of the forum "free of charge"
instead of having an attitude and losing your cool from loaded comments that aren't so nice...
you should challenge yourself to impress everyone the next time you decide to post your work.
earn that respect and compliments for maximum effort.
~g
*fix the terrain id for your tribal cave... the actor can walk anywhere...
why the hell does grammar matter? if the game is good or ok,then that's enough,some people on these forums r real cunts (not you gameface101,ur ok,u haven't done anything)
Uh grammar matters because uh grammer uh makes you uh not a gay fish uh stuttering uh -
Grammar matters because if you make a "good game", how are we supposed to understand shit if your story is wrote like this:
"hero wrot donw name danand pissaid for a r-rr-r-ROOBY ROO RAGGY!!!"
We tried to talk nicely to you but you called us fags and some bad other things. And did you just give me a -rep just because I was trying to point that out to you?
Grammar matters. Why? Because it makes you look good, and it means you can speak well and in a good language. If your posts have good grammar, it means that your game has good grammar, too and is an understandable game. Good grammar is valuable.
And nobody here did anything to you, ok? We tried to help you, and you insulted us. Do you want us to continue being nice?
1) How old are you, kid?
2) Do you know any professional games that have "lol this game is good,u should play it"?
If he say's he's thirteen or something that's very surprising. I'm only ten, and I can make games 100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000999999999999999999999999x better.
And grammar matters. I couldn't figure out what you were saying in your post.
message
no more of my games are being posted on these forums due to the abuse i receive
Quote from: phillip1756 on September 15, 2009, 07:16:55 PM
message
no more of my games are being posted on these forums due to the abuse i receive
...What? Abuse? We were only trying to help you and you say we abuse you? o-o
If you curse out people for pointing out flaws to your game and when they retaliate, you get butthurt and baww - THAT IS NOT ABUSE. YOU BROUGHT IT ON YOURSELF FOR NOT BEING ABLE TO TAKE CRITICISM.
EDIT: Edited out personal rage.
Quote from: phillip1756 on September 15, 2009, 07:16:55 PM
message
no more of my games are being posted on these forums due to the abuse i receive
You insult us
You are immature
You have bad grammar
You are blaming us?
Quote from: Lazer Kirby on September 15, 2009, 07:25:37 PM
Quote from: phillip1756 on September 15, 2009, 07:16:55 PM
message
no more of my games are being posted on these forums due to the abuse i receive
You insult us
You are immature
You have bad grammar
You are blaming us?
4 words
go to hell m8
You have just insulted a member. See what I mean?
Pretty sure a word uses letters instead of numbers.
Anyways, thread should be locked and posted in the archives for us to remember later on.
Any closing words, wanker?
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Quote from: Zylos on September 15, 2009, 08:05:39 PM
Anyways, thread should be locked and posted in the archives for us to remember later on.
Any closing words, wanker?
Also for us to show that we don't tolerate people like him.
Let's close this before the fire spreads.