I'm trying to start composing again. I was inspired by the thought of a clown riding on a super fun ride at a carnival at night. The wind is in his face as he goes around and around. He's smiling, yet a little frightened. He's mostly having fun. Food, people, everywhere. Cotton candy fruit etc.
It isn't good, but I'm proud of myself. I need suggestions, improvments, and criticism.
It really did sound like your source of inspiration. Good job.
lol.
This is awesome if you like, just started.
^_^
edit: Racist.
I hate to make a moopost, but that's LOL is really all I can say.
Quote from: Irock on May 22, 2008, 08:13:03 AMI need suggestions, improvments, and criticism.
Very nice for a first. For improvements, just extend upon but try to kinda keep it simple since it's carnival-style music. That's just my opinion.
Quote from: Irock on May 22, 2008, 08:13:03 AM
I was inspired by the thought of a clown riding on a super fun ride at a carnival at night. The wind is in his face as he goes around and around. He's smiling, yet a little frightened. He's mostly having fun. Food, people, everywhere. Cotton candy fruit etc.
Creepy.
I'm still not sure what a GandNIGGER clock is.
Perhaps he meant "Grand Nigger Cock."
Knowing Irock he's seen alot of those.
He's calling it a GrandNIGGER clock because the clown got afraid.
Quote from: mastermoo420 on May 23, 2008, 01:46:59 AM
He's calling it a GrandNIGGER clock because the clown got afraid.
wut
Black people aren't scary.
Large men wearing monocles who have power levels over 9000 are scary.
It's Grandnigger clock, with a D.
We know. Nobody left the D out.
Nobody said someone left the D out. I was just pointing out that it has a D.
You're a D. D for Dumdum.
Not bad but the chromatics just don't do it for me.
I still have no clue what a grandnigger clock is. EXPLAIN PLZ!
Quote from: sourcecode on May 23, 2008, 05:16:41 PM
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The lack of sense that that post made can only mean one thing: mattsaysurmom.
I hope thats not the case.
IP checks as a proxy. Good call Zylos.
o-o
^I thought that was a frightened face.
Like o_O
Will anyone ever tell me what a grandnigger clock is?
It's like a niggerclock, but it stands upright and has a pendulum.
OIC!
he told me on the irc
i r c 2
a nigger grandfather clock = grandnigger clock
its also a ride at his dream carnival of gay jokers
I shall aceept this explanation.
Nightwolf is correct.
Hence why I accepted his explanation.