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Title: a ghost and a spaceship!
Post by: mitoz on July 25, 2007, 05:05:19 AM
hey every1 i tried making sprites from scratch for the first time. i decided to make a sad ghost. im still working on it and i havent tested it yet to see if it walks good but i want to know what you think of it as a first sprite that i have made. some of the edges may need to be worked out on it and the shading. and the back and maybe the frontview may need work

here it is. the sad ghost


(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg341.imageshack.us%2Fimg341%2F8544%2Fsadghostgj9.png&hash=aa31750cc58f59f4b3647b6d1bdb9130fa0f940a) (http://imageshack.us)
Shot at 2007-07-24

plz give advice and anyone is allowed to use it or edit it to make it better but plz rate this ghost first.

edit: heres the version that wont make the ghost transparent and i made the shadow  and the ghost look a little better

(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg383.imageshack.us%2Fimg383%2F4998%2Fsadghost3dt9.png&hash=bb60a7c673fd209e71a137cfed09b76293da234c) (http://imageshack.us)
Shot at 2007-07-25


heres my new one its a spaceship (kinda)

(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg521.imageshack.us%2Fimg521%2F9641%2Fspacelk2.png&hash=792316cad18dac08a51b6e1cabf6a2be0b576293) (http://imageshack.us)
Shot at 2007-07-28


(still need to move them i dont think there aligned. the ship might be too big)
Title: Re: my first monster sprite
Post by: Leventhan on July 25, 2007, 11:49:39 AM
Very nice, I like monster sprites ;D

Simple and yet ..... cute?
You should add more floaty movement on the ghost, cuz that isn't enough action.

7/10
Overall nice, though.
Title: Re: my first monster sprite
Post by: dollmage on July 25, 2007, 02:56:16 PM
nice mario monster

8/10
Title: Re: my first monster sprite
Post by: Forty on July 25, 2007, 06:41:26 PM
7/10 Its...cute but its good for your first one
Title: Re: my first monster sprite
Post by: mitoz on July 25, 2007, 07:08:19 PM
thx everyone and your correct leventhan i thought that it needs more movement to. im going to still work on it

edit: i put up a newer version the only thing i did is make it look better during the game but i still havent put in more action
Title: Re: my first monster sprite
Post by: Zainox on July 26, 2007, 08:11:09 AM
Cool, that looks awesome.. little, pretty plain but cool as.. Nice work.. 2 thumbs up for you..
Title: Re: my first monster sprite
Post by: Leventhan on July 26, 2007, 11:54:50 AM
Quote from: mitoz on July 25, 2007, 07:08:19 PM
thx everyone and your correct leventhan i thought that it needs more movement to. im going to still work on it

edit: i put up a newer version the only thing i did is make it look better during the game but i still havent put in more action

Well, I was a monster spriter once....
Now I am retired. ;D

My suggestion is don't correct your first sprite ever !
Leave it as it it and make another sprite, move on. Otherwise you won't get better at it.
Title: Re: my first monster sprite
Post by: mitoz on July 26, 2007, 09:36:41 PM
thank you  :)

and i think im gunna follow ur advice leventhan besides i didnt really know what to change anyway.
Title: Re: my first monster sprite
Post by: Leventhan on July 27, 2007, 01:58:27 AM
So, what do you want to make next ?
This should be interesting.
Title: Re: my first monster sprite
Post by: Sophist on July 27, 2007, 02:16:41 AM
Needs more blood. All over it. :D:D:D::D:D

Just kidding, it is awesome cause it is so simple,


CAUSE KNOWLAGE IS POWER!
Title: Re: my first monster sprite
Post by: mitoz on July 27, 2007, 02:32:33 AM
lol  :D im going to put up a new one its a space ship gimme a few minutes and ill put it up and change the topic name

edit: its there :)
Title: Re: a ghost and a spaceship!
Post by: Leventhan on July 27, 2007, 02:45:23 AM
What the ?
No offense, but that ship looks like a cockroach biting some gem.
Title: Re: a ghost and a spaceship!
Post by: mitoz on July 27, 2007, 02:49:11 AM
lol. o well its the best i could do
Title: Re: a ghost and a spaceship!
Post by: Leventhan on July 28, 2007, 04:13:30 AM
Maybe it's time for you, mitoz to make something a little bigger.
Title: Re: a ghost and a spaceship!
Post by: mitoz on July 28, 2007, 02:38:08 PM
yea maybe but the problem is that i dont have much ideas of what to make.
Title: Re: a ghost and a spaceship!
Post by: landofshadows on July 29, 2007, 12:13:26 AM
The Ghost looks better than the RTP one !!!

Good work... There's not enough monster spriters around !!
Title: Re: a ghost and a spaceship!
Post by: mitoz on July 29, 2007, 03:07:42 AM
i dont think its better then the rtp really but thank you  :D


edit: heres a new one i just started and it needs more work and detail but here it is fire.

(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg253.imageshack.us%2Fimg253%2F4220%2Ffirestartxi7.png&hash=3558bfe601a0b2193516b9ca1c0ffe4837ba6b36) (http://imageshack.us)
Title: Re: a ghost and a spaceship!
Post by: Leventhan on July 29, 2007, 08:52:57 AM
Ah, use darker color and shades, otherwise It'll look like a slime.
Woo, floaty.
Title: Re: a ghost and a spaceship!
Post by: mitoz on July 29, 2007, 04:36:09 PM
sorta like this?

(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg443.imageshack.us%2Fimg443%2F5275%2Ffirestart2hf8.png&hash=280eeb857edea70dd04ee8846a40070bef872088) (http://imageshack.us)
Shot at 2007-07-29

or darker?
Title: Re: a ghost and a spaceship!
Post by: Leventhan on July 30, 2007, 02:51:11 AM
It's okay.
After all It's a small fire monster.

Oh, and don't forget the burning action when making the full spriteset, cuz it's a burning.
Title: Re: a ghost and a spaceship!
Post by: mitoz on July 30, 2007, 03:01:38 AM
yea i was thinking of making a little bit of fire flying off it when it moves and the top of it moving a little