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[Visual] Kid Friendly Game Title Screen

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I had an idea for a rated E game. Have a look at the start of the title screen- and the first title screen I've ever, ever, ever made in pixel art.

« Last Edit: May 25, 2015, 06:53:26 PM by boe »

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That looks wicked. I love the crayons especially, though there is a little black line going through the base of the tips that looks unnatural.

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Everything is nice except for the black line that M_A mentioned. Just change the shade of that part of the crayon, and possibly do away with the line.

Also, why does that face in the sky remind my of Bill Cosby?

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Arrow your skills will never cease to amaze me.





















But the face in the background looks like it was having an orgasm.
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Here's a logo for good measure. That screen up there has a long ways to go yet before its juuuuust right, but I like how things are proceeding.


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Take out the black lines, use more realistic shading on the pencil and stuff, look at writing on a real pencil, the grass in the front is boring.

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I would, but that would kill the way I'm trying to style it (kids draw everything with black outlines), I think adding any more writing to the pencil would make it clutter, and yes, the hills are AWFUL, and need to be completely redone. The one the guy is running away from the bird over isn't even the right color yet- its farther off into the distance than the others, it should be bluer.

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I think kids are into Power Rangers. I've never seen a kid into number two pencils, erasers, (and buckets of ointment?).

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Paint, Mr. Miyamoto. It's an art themed game.

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Nice, man.  The large bird in the background is out of place.  I suggest making it much smaller and perhaps adding another two birds.

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Its chasing Gogo. The reasons for this will be explained as the game progresses. :3

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Oh, okay cool.

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Cute! I lol'ed at the moon.
Art themed game? now I'm curious.

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Well, if you wanna see a WIP of the animated logo screen, run this executable. 2.65 MB, should download real quick.

http://www.mediafire.com/?7jnp49tdom9


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Well, if you wanna see a WIP of the animated logo screen, run this executable. 2.65 MB, should download real quick.

http://www.mediafire.com/?7jnp49tdom9


Haha, very clever. I like it a lot.

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It's funny ^^
I agree with Miyamoto-san above me. lol

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http://www.mediafire.com/?69jpmshm51b

All in all, its finished. I just need to do the falling rocks, and polish the collision detection a bit.

Now I'm gonna work on the title screen. Preview:


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As much as it pains me, I think may need to redesign Gogo. He might scare small children- and the more I think about it the more it seems to be possible.

Unless there is some way for me to run a poll with kids, I dunno how I'm gonna decide.

What's a good forum, with lots of small children, where I could run said poll? (no jokes, please, this is my first attempt at a serious original game.)

In the mean time, another executable. This one lets you run all the way up to the unfinished new game screen!

http://www.mediafire.com/?bgk5mjxedum

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As much as it pains me, I think may need to redesign Gogo. He might scare small children- and the more I think about it the more it seems to be possible.
LOL.

Anyways, nice title :D

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As much as it pains me, I think may need to redesign Gogo. He might scare small children- and the more I think about it the more it seems to be possible.

Just make him a big chunk of rubber. Don't make him black, niggers are frightening.

Forum for small children? Nintendo, np.
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Its gone, remember? They took it down indefinitely.

Also, here's a file update.

http://www.mediafire.com/?0wddxzylup0

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Lawl early tileset mockup.


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(kids draw everything with black outlines)
Well then make it thick and cartoony.
That tileset needs some work, but its early, so I'll see what you have as a finished product.

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No you're damn right, it needs work. The slope especially.