Rate my sprites.charsets or characters...

[Knownot]

these ar my first 3 sprites I have ever made...

this was my first sprite but it was jsut edits and mixing two sprites.

this was my first try at making my own sprite and finnaly 3rd times the charm

i finnally di a reasonable one ay aha!!!

[Ayden]

very nice my friend. :wink:

[Melfice666]

good 6/10 but put some shade into th white on the sepheroth edits wings.

[Knownot]

Yea the white in teh wings go transparent so they look like the wings have holes in them. they are supposed to look like they are tatterd and wasted..

[Melfice666]

oh and not to keep critisizing but do you not think that the second ones head is a little too big

[Knownot]

Yup i agree with that one.. the kaiser was a bad one that wasnt suited for RpgmXP. And I  had to change the size of the sprite to make it fit the game size. But thanks for the critisms (I cant spell) aha!

[Jakinblack]

HOLY CRAP! that dark angel is amazing! For a first attempt, it looks superb! If only i could do that...

-Jak-

[Knownot]

Hey thanks Jak....Jack black?

[blueXx]

please avoid gravedigging for topics that are over 1 week old if you don't have anything very serious to say

(like say it's a script and you found a bug and a fix, or otherwise a resource and you are the maker of the topic and you edited it better or i dunno)

[Knownot]

Hey wats up i was just waiting for you to come to this post to say sumthn bout my sprites but u didnt. coz u give good critsms (still cant spell aha)
and wat u mean gravediggin? i dnt get ya so could you rate my sprites and stuff?

[Jakinblack]

No, Not jack black. I wish! Its just a nickname i undertook. My names jack, i wear alot of black clothes and stuff, so im Jack In The Black, The i shortened it. So i became JakInBlack.

Its my user for everything!

-Jak-

[keisukeyui]

They're really cool ideas, but you should add more shading on certain areas (the last guy's pants in particular look rather flat)  For a first try it's really good.  Keep your nose at the grindstone!

[Soul]

~1- grave digging/bumbing is when you post in a old topic to put it to the top.

~2-going off topic is this

No, Not jack black. I wish! Its just a nickname i undertook. My names jack, i wear alot of black clothes and stuff, so im Jack In The Black, The i shortened it. So i became JakInBlack.

Its my user for everything!

-Jak-

[Knownot]

Ok thanks gongo so you were off topic then right??? I getya AHA! anyway gongo tell me what you think about my sprites?