My first charset (UPDATED)

[Kiloku]

I'm trying to make a Princess Zelda Charset, based on: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v65/Master_Link/Sprite%20Collection/PrincessZeldaRound1.gif

[Knownot]

Yea the head looks really good, but I agree with the dress... perhaps try again.... I dont think you have gone into enough detail. It looks like you got lazy and just put big squares. I mean the top of the dress looks real good.

[Kiloku]

I made the dress, but i couldn't get to shade it tough... It's my first pixel art wotk that is going somewhere, so please be patient with me...
Can someone give me hints?