Seeds of Life

From the creators of Fighter: Venusian Story (cancelled)

Comes: SEEDS OF LIFE

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The 4 elemental gods confronted Sufferate, a great wizard who had killed many men, women, and children before he sent the world towards the sun. The 4 elementals were not given enough time to fully conjure up their power, so they were quickly defeated. As a last resort, they called upon a warrior to seal the ashes of Sufferate (for Sufferate was immortal) has the elementals blew themselves and Sufferate up. The warrior did so but instead of throwing the sealed ashes of Sufferate (the Phase) into the depths of the world, he kept the Phase and used threw out the ages as an object to bring fear in others and get what the warrior wanted. But soon a band of heroes killed this warrior and forever was the Phase lost.
 Venusian, son of Tray Star the head of the Safe Guard, watches in horror has his mother and father being ripped to shreds, his brother being shot in the neck (who lives but is unable to talk), and his maid being deeply slashed by a man in a hood and two mysterious gunmen (look like modern day police).  The assailants take his father’s body and flee the scene.
Years later, on the anniversary of his parents death, Venusian is meet by a mysterious man who claims to have saved his father from an ancient war. He tells Venusian to head towards Norman to join a vigilantly group that are set to kill the same assailants who had killed Venusians parents. What he discovers there, changes his life and sets on a spiraling adventure.
The story intertwines the past and present of Mako (the world) to a compelling tragic story of Venusian. A boy who had vengeance on his mind for the death of his parents learns that maybe it was his own father who brought this upon them.


I am still trying to prefect the story so please feel free to help me out. I just want to tell I am new to this and have no scripting skills. I am one man and only one man. Please help me alot.     

May I help you?
I can do a little modification on script, master of events, and mapping.
If you'd like me to help you, PM me, or just reply my post.

And read my sig.

Sure, we'll help you out. If you have problems, just post them. Somebody will help you.

You need to include at least a screenshot and some character plot or the topic will get locked.

Thanks guys. (Tears down Oneray's checks.

Oh, Blizz's right.
Screenshot and chara's profile...
You already post the plot, don't you?

I just wanted to say that I am about release my demo. I will give you some screen shots so you can judge my progress. Plus, you can direct to a post that will help me in posting up screen shots and stuff.