The title screen needs more work, all you did was got a title screen background and slapped some font on top it it, it would of been better to at least put some effort into the font, like for example if its about medieval times then find a Gothic font and then put some effects onto it. If you can't put any effects onto it at least find a matching font. Sorry if it sounded harsh but you could of done better.
Apart from that, your mapping isn't bad, but not great. As for the Arshes sprite, I think downloading some different sprites would be a wise choice, there are ALOT of Arshes haters... not naming anyone from the millions*cough* blizzard *cough*. Good luck, the story however needs a bit of work.
~Winged