its very good, levels are abit off tho.
the thing with trance tracks like this, is nothing happens for ages.. tho thats just the style, the percusion was structured well, and for the genre your aiming for, its pretty spot on.
needs some tidying mixdown wise, little bit on the blury side, but it has good dynamics. also the mix as a whole isnt very "bright"(lackes treble+sparkle). and ur percusion is sitting a little toward the back abit. and ur kick should be a little more pronounced
otherwise very good