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Ok here's my detective story, its long but hope you guys atleast "Read it"

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Chapter 1

It was a pleasant morning, while Zimba was having his tea.
( I have a collection of stuffed toys the tiger cub who is a beanie baby is one of them, Zimba)
Fluffy entered with a cigar in his hand. (Dalmatian)
He lit his charminar and said to Zimba, “Want a cigar?”
Zimba said, “No, and since when did you start smoking, its bad for health!”
Fluffy replied, “Its not ordinary man, I made it, it looks like a cigar and operates like one but has bubble gum particles. When you intake u get the taste of gum when u release carbon-dioxide gets blackened, don’t know how, and comes out. But it’s not-harmful.”
Zimba took one, as soon as he inhaled he chocked!
“Its not for all eh kid? The “CHOSEN ONE” couldn’t do it” Fluffy said sarcastically.
That time Wolfy came down, he said “Hey guys what’s for breakfast, Fluffy, can I have that bubble smoke?”
“Yeah sure”
“Thanks” Wolfy took one and choked too.
“Well I told both of you but you guys just don’t have the skill”
The phone rang that moment.
Wolfy picked it up.
“Uh-huh…ok…got it…yeah…uh-huh…sure…yeah…ok…ok”
“Will u stop that and speak normal!” Zimba said.
“Haha, guys someone’s finally give us a chance, they said if u can to the case, or else they have to call Inspector Bear, I know he’s our friend but… u know…”
“Oh but I don’t” said Fluffy funnily
“ Well neither do I, but what can we do, it’s a thing everyone uses, we gotta catch up with the world”
“I wonder how handless people do that”
Wolfy staring at Fluffy.
“What’s the problem?” Zimba asked
“The guy didn’t tell me but we just go where he told us to, probably no, MOST PROBABLY his house”
Fluffy read the address.
“It is his house”
“How do you know?”
“ One because its address tell us that most probably no…it IS HIS HOUSE, two no-one would call us to a hotel for such a place, if he was staying in one, the hotel’s name would be in the address right?”
“Your good, but I’m better,” said Wolfy
“Yeah, the choke on the cigar said that,” said Fluffy sarcastically
They reached the house of the caller, Glitter Bear.
He first asked, “How much is your salary?”
“We don’t know yet but whatever u give us we may decide to keep that!” Wolfy replied.
“Well what’s the problem?” Zimba asked.
“We would like to know in details” he added.
“Well the thing is” G.Bear said as they were all seated on the red sofas in the drawing room which was not so large but had 4 sofas, in which 2 were big and 2 were single seaters, a unit, and some things in the unit.
Fluffy was sitting eye closed, he didn’t use to talk a lot usually, he used to concentrate, he was the patient guy, unlike Zimba who was always in action, and Wolfy was somewhat like Zimba, but did use to think a little, better than Zimba but not as good as Fluffy.
All of them were good in their things.
Fluffy laughed a small smile, he usually made everyone laugh, must’ve remembered some of his joke.
“What happened?” G.Bear asked.
“Oh nothing, please continue!” Replied Fluffy.
“Yeah, the thing is” G.Bear said again, “Someone in my house has been murdered.”












CHAPTER 2

“WHAT!” Zimba shouted
“Yeah its unbelievable” G.Bear replied.
“But we have to control ourselves!” Wolfy.
“The thing we have to do is know where the murder has been taken place” Fluffy told.
“Here, in this house!” G.Bear said.
He got up and opened a door, which lead to a passage, which was not wide but enough, it had paintings and all. It was clear to all that G.Bear was a sort of rich person.
“In this room, his own room.” G.Bear said.
“May ask who was murdered?” Zimba said.
“Yeah sure!”
There were a few moments of silence.
“So who was it?” Fluffy said interrupting the silence.
“Oh, it was my younger brother, Little Bear”
“I see…I see…”
“What?”
“Sir, have you lost it?” Zimba said
Wolfy hid a smile.
“No, no I just keep getting kind of lost after that shock”
“Hmm” Fluffy hummed.
“What happened Fluffy?” Wolfy asked.
“Nothing lets just look around for clues and all” Zimba said. “I know Fluffy wanted to say this, but what can I say?”
“Whatever you want to!” Fluffy joked.
The trio looked around, then Fluffy ran to a place and picked up a piece of paper.
It read: -

YO! YOU’RE GONNA TO DIE MON!

“Wow” Zimba said. “So silly”
“Yeah so it may seem but it is a threat!” Wolfy exclaimed.
“So what are your conclusions?” G.Bear asked.
The trio looked at him stupidly.
“WHAT?” G.Bear asked.
They still stared.
Then Fluffy nodded his head in such a manner as if he wanted to show that G.Bear was an amateur.
“How do I say this to you sire, I know you got a shock but…urm” Fluffy said.
“But what?” G.Bear asked
“BUT YOU HAVE LOST IT SIRE!” Zimba shouted.
“What?”
“Is it old age or just like that or cause of the shock?” Wolfy said.
“Maybe all 3” Fluffy said.
“WHAT?” G.Bear still didn’t get it.
“Sire, we mean we cant reach a conclusion so fast!” Fluffy explained.
Then a guy entered the room. He was, we learnt, Jojo.
The Monkey.
“YO MON! WAZ UP!?” he said



CHAPTER 3

“Well, well, well!” said G.B.
“Wa happened man?” said Jojo
“You killed your own friend, how could you! The note is in your style!”
“There are many people with a style of the similar my friendly bear” Said Wolfy.
Zimba and Fluffy said that it was true and anyone could also immitate.
“Huh?” G.B asked.
“YO MAN! WATZ UP! IVE BEEN HANGING ROUND THE CORNER CUZ I WAS WORRIED MON!” Said Fluffy. “Examples”
“Oh I see, so sorry Jojo”
“GB can you leave we need a talk with Jojo.
GB left and then JOJO said, “I should tell you sire, HE HAS LOST IT!”
“Yes, we noticed that”
GB at that moment burst in and said, “Police! Someone called them!”
“Who? Was it you Jo?” said Zimba.
“I did” came a voice.
A serious guy came in, then his expression changed into funny now.
“Actually I did not, they came to know as little was very known, and news must’ve spread.”
“Who are you?” Asked Wolfy.
“OH MY GOD! It’s him, the great, Snowy, the magician!”
“Wow! You know me” said Snowy (the lamb). “Here’s my card”
Snowy took out nothing and kept nothing in the hands of Zimba.
Then he put a hand in the ear of Zimba and got a card.
“Wow!” Zimba said.
“Humph” Fluffy said. “He just put nothing, and then the card slipped out of his jacket and he pretended as if it was your ear.”
“Wow your very good Fluffy” Snowy praised.
“Yes thank you” he said. “How do you know my name?”
“Then a card slipped from his hand, then hundreds more.
“I saw your ad, so I thought I’d make you cards, I thought of coming to your place but, anyways, its just that if you ever need help in tricking and all, ask me.”
“Sure why not”
The police entered that time.
“Hello Trio, so you finally found something to do” Inspector Bear said.
“Move everyone move”
After it was cleared, IB said, “ No footprints, shocking.”
“I think I should meet the rest in this house” said Zimba.
“Well, there is Fricker, the scientist, he makes all kind of stuff, he’s the penguin” said GB.
“Well, you never know, scientists make flying devices!” said Fluffy with a smile, lighting his charminar.


CHAPTER 4

“Ah, you must be Prof. Fricker!” Said Zimba as they entered Fricker’s room
“Yes, that’s me!” Said Fricker
“OK Lets get to the point, you know there has been a murder- (Fluffy was interrupted)
“Not only that, my Gravity Controller is missing!” Fricker exclaimed.
“Did that have the powers to make a guy fly?” Wolfy asked.
“YES OFCOURSE!” Fricker told. “Only I was a master in it, its not easy to control that device, you need to have right balance or you would float here and there, there are some buttons which help you but that’s not much of a help”
“I see, I see” Zimba said.
“Well, its question time, Zimba, please go tell G.B that we want to meet everyone personally.” Said Fluffy
“Right on Fluffy!” replied Zimba.
The first chance was G.B’s, as he entered he said, “Which one of you is going to ask me the questions?”
“I think I would do that” Wolfy told.
“Ok I will answer what I know” G.B looked nervous.
“What was your relationship with the suspect?”
“You mean Little?”
“YES LITTLE!” Wolfy said gritting.
“Oh he was my younger brother, we called each other brother bear, he u-
“Please answer what it is asked, its not that we don’t want to hear, it just confuses me” Wolfy added, “When was Little murdered, or when did he attempt suicide?”
“I think its murder and it was just yesterday night”
“The same night the scientists invention was stolen?”
“Yes I think so”
“Okay, who do you suspect?’
“ I don’t think anyone would do it, we were all so close friends!”
“Were?’
“OH you should know what I mean, we still are friends, I think you should assume that”
“If I start assuming, sire, the world would come to an end” Wolfy smiled.
He added, “ What were you doing that night?”
There was a little moments silence.
“Why, Sire, making up your lie?” Fluffy said smiling, lighting his charminar.
G.B looked at him nervously, and scared or shocked, it was hard to tell.
“No…no…not at all, I’m just trying to think what happened”
“Think or remember, and what happened last night? Why I can tell you the no. of vegetable pieces I ate yesterday night!” Fluffy smiled again, it was clear he was trying to tease”
“You can?” said Zimba astonished
Fluffy stared at Zimba.
“OF COURSE YOU CAN! I was just joking” Zimba made up.
G.B stared.
ON this Zimba have a small made up laugh.
“Back to the question guys!” Wolfy exclaimed.
“Ah, yes, I was reading my newly issued book from this library down the street called the “Readers Heaven” library, it’s a very interesting book so I felt like reading and reading, as it grew more and more interesting!”
“I see, you may go now, but please do call in Jojo, Fluffy will take care of him I suppose” Wolfy looked interrogatively at Fluffy.
Fluffy blew the smoke and nodded with a smile.
As soon as Jojo entered the room Fluffy exclaimed. “ YO MON! WAZ UP! JUST WANN ASK YOU SOME FUNKY QUESTIONS!”

Chapter 5

“HE, Mon, u a copycat!’ Jojo said.
“Well, man, just answer these questions or I have to count you killer” Fluffy said
“Ok mon, go on”
“That rhymes you know! Anyways, where were you on the night of murder?”
“In my room, writing my song”
“Song?”
“Yes, I’ve started this song of making rap songs MON!”
“Who do you suspect if you do suspect anyone?”
“Fricker “
“Why so?”
“ I mean he had a gravity machine, he could fly whenever!”
“How do you know he did?”
“It’s not like the whole blames on the penguin so I’m relaxed and am doing a mistake, HE TOLD US!”
 “You’re voice style has changed” Said Fluffy with a smile, he lit his charminar
“Sire, I only speak like that for fun, not in usual”
“ I see… I see “
“Anymore questions you may want to ask me sire?”
“NO, you may go, but do call in Snowy”
“Yeah sure”
Jojo had gone Fluffy turned to Zimba, “Handle it ok?”
“Sure pal”
Snowy entered the room most pleased.
“Why are you happy today sire?” asked Zimba
“Well, I had a show today morning, it went good” Snowy said happily.
“So, answer my questions! Where were you that night?”
A slip came out of his hand, it read: -
Well, I was practicing for my show in my room.
“Oh come on! Answer in spoken words. Who do you suspect if you do?”
“Glitter Bear” Said Snowy, everyone was astonished!
“Why?”
“Because his younger brother had a better business and if the younger one died, he would get profit, a hell lot of profit!’
“ I see… how were your relationships and others also with Little Bear ?”
“Well we were all best friends, every night we used to sit in the drawing room, after dinner that is , and laugh all night maybe.”
“A year in a second eh?”
“Yes you may say so”
“Very well, you may go”
“But do call in Fricker!” Said Fluffy.
“Sure”
A paper slipped from his hand
It read: -
Please do come in the night, I will be waiting for you, I have to show you something of importance related to this murder.
Snowy turned back a smiled.
Fluffy blew a smoke and said, “Why Wolfy? What are you going to ask the last suspect?”
“Oh I have been working that…don’t worry, this case will come to an end”
“Just let me hear Fricker’s story and let me see what Snowy has to show, I think the case has ended”
After that sentence, Fricker entered
















Chapter 6

“Well? Who do you suspect?” Wolfy asked
“I don’t exactly know who to suspect! It could be anyone!” Fricker replied.
“You do know, it was YOUR invention which was used”
“Yes I do”
There was a few moments silence.
“So?”
“So?”
“SO?”
”Oh, shut up” Fluffy said.
“Huh?” Fricker seemed confused.
“By that sentence, I meant, what do you think, most people suspect you” Wolfy said.
“Oh, oh sorry.”
“Hm…” Fluffy seemed to be thinking something.
“What?” Zimba suddenly asked.
“I think, I just need one more evidence.”
“That means you may go” Wolfy said to Fricker.

                                                   *
It was 9 in the night.
The trio slowly went to the door, where the saw their magician friend awaiting.
“What is it you wanted to show?”
“This letter” Snowy said. He, as usual, took out something from his sleeve.
On the letter was written-

Agree.
Your entire base is belonging to me.
Or else…

“WHAT? This could be written by a child!” Zimba shouted.
“No, I read a paper that day, in this house, it was a recipe of some food, usually what Glitter makes.” Snowy said.
“Haha!”  Fluffy laughed. “Snowy, tell everyone in the house to be in the living room in the evening, at 5, I just want to visit the library in the morning.”
“Why such a request?”
“I know the killer” Fluffy said, he lit his charminar.


Chapter 7

It was 8 in the morning.
“Guys, It’s my plan to the library, let’s see who solves this case first, we all shall meet at Little’s house, ok?” Fluffy said.
“Sure” Wolfy told.
Fluffy left.
Wolfy turned to Zimba, he opened his mouth when Zimba blabbered-
“Now what?”
“We just wait and- (he was cut)
“Watch?”
“No, play a 2 player game” Wolfy grinned.
“Like?”
“First Mortal Kombat, then Need for speed most wanted, on LAN, and maybe then we’ll play that dofus!”
 “Sure, I’ll go on the computer”

                                   *
Fluffy told to the old librarian, “Where will I find old newspapers” he lit his charminar. “I mean, not as old as you” then he grinned.
The librarian seemed to be sort of deaf; he didn’t say anything, just pointed towards a column.
“Oh sorry” Fluffy apologized. “Can I Bubble Oak?”
The Elder one did not reply.
                                   *
It was 5 pm.
There was a ring at The Little House.
Fricker opened the door.
Fluffy entered.
“Well?” G.B asked.
“I have the solution.
Well, first I suspected our dear friend Snowy, but he is innocent, completely, why if it wasn’t for him, I was in a double mind!”
Snowy smiled.
“I first thought it was Jojo, for the letter was written in his type of writing, but after I saw the letter of Snowy, that said to Little that all his base should go to the writer so I knew who it was.”
Fluffy turned slowly pointing at G.B smiling.
“Ah, Bear. First YOU call us, thinking we wont suspect you because of that, then YOU write the letter of Jojo, I realized because, I read the paper Snowy gave me. I also realized that Little was rich, and if his base, which meant his property went to Glitter, who was in loss, it would’ve given the sparkle some profit. And Little knew about the letter, but thought it was just a little joke.
As we know Glitter can’t wait.”
“So he’s in for 2 crimes, stealing and killing.” Zimba said.
“No, actually not.” Fluffy said.
Everyone looked at him.
“Do you know Fricker, is staying here since only 2 months, during which he pretended he’s making a gravity machine. The truth is that, Fricker, has already twice gone to jail for theft. Its pretty simple he would steal a gravity controller from some famous scientist. So he stole the machine for Glitter bear for some money, isn’t that right Mr. Penguin?”
“I… I” Fricker was out of words.
“I in the jail you two, Ins Bear!” Fluffy shouted, Inspector bear came out of the kitchen.
“Nice cookies!” He said. “Oh sorry, you two are arrested.”
“Fluffy, how did you know he was a thief, and G.B was in loss and all?” Snowy asked.
“Yeah MON! tell us!” Jojo added.
“From today I’m going to read the newspaper every-morning”
Everyone understood his hint.
I hope you readers did too.
The trio then went back, Snowy said, “Your fees will be delivered”
Fluffy opened the door, lit his charminar and walked out saying a simple hum. 





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