[Visual] Art by me =D

Lavata · October 02, 2006, 09:59:09 AM

I don't know that yet =\. Myabe he did something bad. $:-\$

Yossy · October 02, 2006, 11:59:52 AM

The dude on the left is definitely wearing White Mage robes.

Your profiles need work. The human face is not a straight line with a pointed bump in it for a nose. Find some photos of people in profile or something and study them. Look at a bunch of different people, too, to see how much profiles actually vary.

Lavata · October 02, 2006, 06:56:59 PM

Tis not a white Mage robe!

And yeah, I know I need work on the profiles. I'm trying to search for a few thigns to help me out.

Yossy · October 03, 2006, 01:10:58 PM

I'm sorry. That is a white mage robe.

Lavata · October 03, 2006, 05:47:23 PM

Well, if that's what you want it to be, then it is. I didn't want to leave it bare so I tried to add something to his clothes that represent 'fire'. Didn't come out that well looking likt that though.

Alot of people I draw have those things on their clothes.

Lavata · October 04, 2006, 01:23:31 AM

Here are some doodles I have been working on. It's basically a practice sheet where I do things over and over, trying to get the feel for doing them. I have been working on hands and faces as of yesterday.

Pixie · October 04, 2006, 01:54:33 AM

That's pretty cool! In my opinion the faces are a bit too...straight (square-ish?). But it does add a neat look, so I can't really say it's bad or anything.

Lavata · October 04, 2006, 10:14:56 AM

Yeah...they are a tad squareish..but I plan to fix that in time.

Lavata · October 05, 2006, 01:45:03 AM

Well...as you can see in this next one: it WAS going to be a doodle page...but I started drawing something and worked on it from there. The only real thing I want to note is the man to the left part of the page.

Arrow · October 05, 2006, 02:42:48 AM

If I could just say so, the large face looks like an old man.

The latest is cool.

Lavata · October 05, 2006, 08:28:30 PM

Yeah, thanks for the comments. I'll post the finished version soon. For now, however, I'll see if anyone else wants to reply.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/40917159/
^the completed pic

Lavata · October 05, 2006, 11:53:47 PM

Well, here is another.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/40926768/

I really don't know why....but this looks tons better in RL that it does when scanned.

Pixie · October 06, 2006, 12:14:26 AM

If it looks really good now, what would it look like before being scanned?

Yossy · October 06, 2006, 12:23:18 PM

That happens sometimes. Play around with the settings on your scanner until it's perfect... that's what I have to do.

Lavata · October 06, 2006, 04:03:43 PM

Yay. Well...here is another one. This one is colored an al. I think it's good.

It was going to be a cover page.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/40956398/

It's kind of big tho =\

OR...view it here:

WHich one of the three do you like best, if any?

Pixie · October 06, 2006, 06:48:16 PM

The guy in the front...his head might be a bit big? Otherwise I really like it.

Lavata · October 06, 2006, 08:06:28 PM

His head is supposed to be big, lol. His nose is also suppposed to be like that. I think your the first person to say you liked him best. Mine is Wrath (yellow-haired man.)

Maglor · October 06, 2006, 08:12:45 PM

I prefer girls

Lavata · October 08, 2006, 11:08:00 PM

So do I. I can't draw girls that good though..T.T

Girls are alot harder to draw than guys are. It is much harder to draw a hot/pretty looking girl than it is to draw any kind of guy. Women have more corves and softer features, which is something that I am not used to drawing. SO, along with many other things, they are also something I ned alot of work on.

Lavata · October 09, 2006, 11:20:50 AM

OK. Well, here is another one.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/41114739/

Yossy · October 09, 2006, 03:35:50 PM

He's cool. Looking like some kinda hunter/ranger guy. I like his braid.

Lavata · October 09, 2006, 05:09:15 PM

Thanks ^^

And another. This is Wrath, one of the characters from something I am working on.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/41127053/

Pixie · October 09, 2006, 08:07:38 PM

They're both good! I like Wrath better though.

Lavata · October 09, 2006, 08:51:05 PM

Lol, thanks. I'm trying to improve. I hope it's getting better.

Lord Dante · October 11, 2006, 02:59:59 AM

Quote from: Lavata on October 09, 2006, 11:20:50 AM
OK. Well, here is another one.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/41114739/

alright, its good, except for a few things.

The eye that is further away from the viewer is a different structure (has a corner, is closed) compared to his left eye, which is open curves. Also, the left hand (and this is a common mistake) shouldn't be horizontal to the ground, but sortof at a curved angle with the thumb on the lower side. its a bit hard to explain though...so...yeah