[Visual] The pic i drew

here is a pic i drew,tell me what you think



i'll be putting up more when i have them completed

Wat are you us to? You have made 3 posts of the same thing? I am no mod but you are going the right way for a ban!  :evil:
Dont spam, its stupid and irriating

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i think i did anyway,the only one which pops up is this one..and that's only if i use the search command.....and you could have at least told me what you thought of it.

Yea I deleted your other two topics that had the same thing in them.

It looks pretty neat, are you gonna ink it?

You should maybe colour it too =)

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thanks.The reason i posted two of the same is because i didn't think any of them made it through...but then i wasn't do sure and din't make anymore.

and i don't think it's gonna be inked or anything.So,what do other people think of it....anything wrong,anything i could fix...etc...

here's another pic i did,i think it is better than the first one...but i'll let you decide. Which do you think is better so far?

Its good... The proportions are about right (Ie the length of the arms, legs etc...)

The Sword though would never of been made... The spikes towards the end would stop him from stabbing any-one... they would just get stuck... it would be great for splitting skulls, but not as a stabbing weapon...



Ypu see the above none of the swords have spikes facing forwards near the tip... simple reason it makes the rest of the sword pointless...

If a sword has holes (4 internal bleeding) in the blade, and the spikes face the opposite direction to yours... so the sword goes in but does not come out these swords were made to stay in... stab once and let go...

Try finding reference material...

The sword looks great, but pratically it wont not work...

Oh gotta say... Mr Pie... Nice Ava
http://www.picpop.com/gallery/albums/userpics/1-14-05/japanesesgoillslayer.gif

OK then,it seems as though i will have to fix that part then although the sword was never really meant for stabbing,he only uses it to slash at and brush away anyone who gets to close.He can,in my thing i am writing,just stab them and then slice them in half.Lavata was meant to be extremely fast,hardly ever on his feet,or so it would appear,you would have to be very fast to dodge his blade.But all in all i'm gonna change it anyway

Your obsessed with making yourself into a boss, aren't you???

Well, that's cool. Anyway, try a different pose. Also, he's too human. Make a monster monster.

He's to human?....well,ya,he IS a human after all,he's not supposed to be a monster,he is just wearing all this freaky armor and stuff

here si the last Lavata one,more monster-like than the other ones.

I like the sword...He looks brilliant...

Is he going to be in your RPG ?

i dunno,if someone could try and color it to see what it loks like i might lol,but i doubt anyone would do that,and i can't use all that fancy coloring stuff and so on.

If you have photoshop, just google for some colouring tutorials. It cant do any harm to learn can it? Once you get the hang of it you'l be surprized at how great some of your sketches can turn out.

Swordopolis has got to see this art of land of shadow though i think it wasn't made by him. (DUH!)
And lavata, your image was good, but it was a little too small.

Here you are mate... I have coloured it... had no idea what the colour scheem was... buy hey ho....



And here's a Battler PNG file... Import it into your RPG and have fun !!!



Nice Drawing Mate !!!

wow! that's nice,thanks alot!