My title screen please let me know what you think of it.

[Alakazam]

I still need to work on many things for my story, I had some of it once but i've started to change many things about it so to better explain the title i'll explain the very basic.

Main character:
Name: Abaster
Age: 20's

Main character of the game is evil, he searches for the orbs of King
( kings name undecided), who was an evil man the ruled the land many decades ago, the orbs give it's owner demonic powers.

I have more but like i said i'm still working on it so there are many holes in my story.

let me know what you think of the title screen or if you guys know of a better
font i can use..

[Captain Callahan]

Dude Awesome!! Title Screen! I love it and story sounds pretty good! Great Job!

[Cryforequanimity]

Yeah, thats is very good. I like it too...very unique, but still eye-catching. Good job.

[Alakazam]

Thanks guys, and i just noticed that spelling error i made hehe,
I will post more story when i get in deeper, peace.

[Stedar]

Yeah, i like it too.
Great Job, good luck with the game as well!

[Inaru]

It's O.K. It's not my favorite.

[Red Eye Dragoon]

really  good, id use it if i could

[Alakazam]

Thanks for your comments guys appreciate it, red eye dragoon i have the pic (orb) i used to make it, if you want it i will post it.

[balmung]

its nice! i like it

[Captain Callahan]

Alakazam where exactly did you gwet the picture for it?

[rpg_maximus]

Thats probably the best one i've evr seen!!!

[Alakazam]

Thanks guys i'm glad so many liked it, zshadowzero27, i saved the pic off of google picture search here's the link.

http://images.google.com/images?q=orb&hl=en&btnG=Search+Images

You'll notice i used the orb in the 2nd pic.

[dracohaze]

It's pretty good, but there are a whole lot of games where the robs give their wielder tremendous power or special abilities, but go ahead and use it. That is no reason for you to stop, just because it is a common story type.

[Alakazam]

Thank you, I though of this as well, that it might be a bit common, but since it is my first game it was alright to walk down this path, i'm sure i can make it original enough since the main character is evil to start with, meaning that it wont go the way many hero stories do.

[Captain Callahan]

Yeah that will be fine it sounds cool, if i were you i would go with the story you got now.

[rpg_maximus]

Yea, it sounds cool, i would like to play when yoour done