my mk rpg

[kio18]

thanks for the review logan
but i will continue this game because after finishing the mk story in mk in digital vs mk in drawings 6 zathura
i will made the cyber astronaut story if you dont know about him
how he has been kidnapped,rescued
and how can be predator the bounty hunter

you will know for the video

but i need work

news for the next game

in the dark dream the final boss will be animated with the tutorial in the youtube
and i will say thanks you for this tutorial
and i did some animations of nightmare
punch,powers,shields,etc

after to finish i will upload the video to show you

[Holkeye]

I'm guessing English is not your native tongue, and I think its great that you try learning another language. That said, there are a few issues:

1. Nobody can understand what you're trying to say.
2. You didn't follow any template for your project. I'm assuming this is partly because you didn't, or can't read the thread about it. This leads to...
3. There's nothing here. Its just videos and broken English.
4. Your game really doesn't look that good. Are you young? It looks like something a young child would make, and if you're under 13, you can't be a member here.

I'm not trying to discourage you, but maybe you'd be better at a site in your first language. That way you could get the feedback you need. You talk about making 6 games or something, but you haven't posted one.

[kio18]

i understand

after i will upload my other games

I'm just improving
also am of legal age which
I am a member
and if the drawings seem to draw children
but I try to practice a lot and does not come out as I expected
also try the game a total entertainment for the game

but I need tutorial character selection and poses to strike
and launch power type battle system but action rpg
and if
learn English and some but not much so I use the translator to understand your posts

but also will try to do my messages with the translator

I hope you understand

[chewey]

keep up the good work

[kio18]

thanks i will try the best

[Dwarra?]

Your voice acting is superb. If Argentina had more men like you, then the Falklands would be ours.

[kio18]

you come from british
because if you are the argentinian soldiers fought hard and the Malvinas belong to Argentina

[Acolyte]

If you're not a great graphical artist, you can always use other resources.

Here's some facesets. They'd need resizing, but I think it's a better alternative to your current facesets.

A note on mapping: Don't make every map a long winding one tile-wide corridor with nothing going on. And don't have a bunch of enemies just bombard you like that. It's bad design.

Here's an example of a decent 2k3 map:


Scatter the monsters throughout, not just in one area.

[pacdiggity]

you come from british

oh crap he caught you sword!

[kio18]

thanks but
i have sufficient charaset,music,sounds,tileset

but maybe can help

[Acolyte]

Your tilesets may be sufficient, but you need better mapping skills.

[kio18]

dont worry i will training and do one map with decorations and everything else

[kio18]

another update

the introduction of cyber astronaut story of this game
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LDFBVLvYoLg&feature=youtu.be

primary cutscene of cyber astronaut story

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=me8p6L8WwhA&feature=youtu.be

enjoy and comment

[Esmeralda]

Upload the games already

[LoganF]

Like Skanker says, you need to stop focusing on producing videos to show off what you've done and actually upload the games for play.

Putting up videos is okay sometimes, but you have too many and if a person watched them all, he'd have no reason to play the game any more.

[kio18]

you right

but the sixth game is not finish yet

and now i will upload the game with rtp to play

[LoganF]

We still need to play games 1 to 5 yet, so it's okay that you haven't finished the sixth one. Look at real games; it can be years before you see a sequel to a game. There's really no rush.

[Holkeye]

These aren't games. They're movies.

[kio18]

all right

just wait

the first game will be uploaded with the rtp

wait please is uploading in rapidshare

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edit

there are the three first game installed and rtp

the first (most worse project started)
https://rapidshare.com/files/3899557189/Project1.rar

the second the dragon invaders(upgrading little more)
https://rapidshare.com/files/414318798/mk2.rar

the third animality vs humanity(little better than others)
https://rapidshare.com/files/2180488767/mkdvsmkd3.rar

enjoy

[LoganF]

I'd suggest putting those links in the first post you made too, so that people checking out the thread can get to them easily. In the event you don't know, there's an edit button on the post that you can select and make changes to the post.

[kio18]

all right
i edited the first post check it

[KobraStatik]

*snickers*
Sorry, but I've sort of been stalking this thread for a while. It's very interesting to watch this conversation, yes?
Anyways, I agree with everyone else. You sort of need to work on your mapping even though you have good tilesets, and don't take too big of a bite with the game-making! Six games is great, but go at your own pace, ne? :3

[kio18]

understood

anyway

two cutscenes videos added check it out

http://www.youtube.com/user/TheKio18?ob=0&feature=results_main

in the third cutscene is the action scene and i made it in photoshop with movie maker

[Illumination™]

[spoiler]
What is mk?
[/spoiler]

[kio18]

is mortal kombat
in my signature said