Opening title pic

Just wanted to get a little feedback on what you all think of the little picture I worked up for my game

The bevels and the glow both look ugly. There's no real contrast in the picture, so it looks kinda flat. What's the game about?

It's not very appealing to me, but at least you're making your own. I think the game is about what happens to these people no one remembers.

OK so you don't like my picture :'( lol I see what your talking about with "flatness" but I kinda suck at graphics and such but I spent a little more time on it today let me know what you think now any pointers would be cool. As for the story all summed up hero is found abandoned as a baby in a town that is all but forgot behind a mountain range. No one in the town can remember the last time if ever anyone has left the town or how to do even if they wanted, so it is a complete mystery how the kid go there. so he grows up feeling like there is something pulling him but never knowing what it is he and his friends wonder the mountains constantly eventually finding a way out where the encounter a "force" that tells em a bunch of stuff and unlocks the mighty powers within them and that they must... you guessed it defeat the great evil and save the world... Kinda cliché but is a story I like :-)



(edited out the first image as I forgot to resize)

this does not belong in new projects.

I think its a really cool opening title, the second one i mean:) but yeah, what namkcor said, if you want more feedback on your storyline you should put it in the new projects forum, but otherwise i really cool pic:)

I love the second one, although the tree gets in the way of the first word kind of and the end of the last word is sort of hard to read, unless you intentionally made it that way.

Thank you for the feedback on the pic... yeah I wanted it to kind of fade away but not as much as it does I have since redone that part and added a reflection of the words in the water as well. And as for the story it is not ready to be picked apart as after I finished mapping the first continent and populating and eventing the for few towns I am making some story modifications to fit with some of the changes I have made