Enchanted Realm(Update 12-20-10)

ENCHANTED REALM
Notes: Gate of Darkness has been cancel because it didn't meet my standard.

Spoiler for Story:

   The story begins when Castle Renal was bombed by Airships from a unknown Kingdom.
The villagers escaped along with Prince Muhan. The four warrior of Kingdom Renal escaped to Renal Forest to seek the
Temple of Memory to find out what been happening in the world. Meanwhile a group of baddies are heading the to the same area as
the four warriors.

Spoiler for The World:

The world is just one large continent.
With many country and  towns. Also surrounded by small islands.
Has four Towers, six kingdom, some cave, mountain, forest, and rivers.
And one large ocean. This world is taken place in the late 1600s and early 1700s

Spoiler for The Four Main Characters:

Drake
Age:20
Class: Knight
Bio: He is the leader of the four warriors of Kingdom Renal.
He was raised by the King. He has no parents but has one brother who was adopted.

Skylia:
Age: 19
Class: Cleric
Bio: She is the healer of the team and also the wise one. Her parents has escaped the attack of Renal but she has lost her brother
Jester the Sage. She will do anything to avenge her brother.

Hector
Age:21
Class: Dragoon
Bio: He is the Dragoon of Kingdom Renal and a laid back person. He seem to be a bit quick when the group is lost.
His father was the greatest Dragoon alive and Hector is going to follow is father path.

Junevia
Age:19
Class: Wizard
Bio: She has been coming up with plans and places for the group to head next. She has high magical skills and
has a full family living somewhere in the world. She was sent to Kingdom Renal by her mother for training.

Spoiler for Screenshots:

Coming very soon!

Spoiler for Features:

Tons of Scripts
4 Playable Characters
Optional Bosses
Final Fantasy IX Music
More will be added

Spoiler for Credit:

I working on put the Credit together

Spoiler for Video:

Will be posted on YouTube!

No Demo at the time.

My project been erased because of my sister restarted the computer.
But don't give up on this game I still working on restoring the game with new things in it.
So be sure to check for new stuff.

This looks like it might be okay. However, your mapping is a bit unusual. By that I mean irregular and cluttery. However, it's plain that you have a solid idea of what you want the game to do, as shown by the scripts you have included. Clean up the maps, in particular the building sizes- each building should be two roof tiles high and two wall tiles high. Also, try centering your shop signs, or at least putting them above the doors.

I will fix my map up and those signs thx.

Perhaps you should consider proofreading (or get someone to) your characters' dialogue. I like the bestiary/monster book idea. it's always great keeping track of new sights.

Perhaps you should consider proofreading (or get someone to) your characters' dialogue. I like the bestiary/monster book idea. it's always great keeping track of new sights.

i try fixing it before releasing a demo.   

This game is being postpone.
I will continue this during the summer so I can get school out of the way.