Yeah, these requests really should be separate and fleshed out a bit more; it's not required by the rules of the forum by any means, but it would make it a little easier for scripters to figure out what you want.
For instance, on the States request:
Mostly OK, but how do you want to deal with multiple states. If petrified and Zombie, should it be grey or green? Also, are you using any battle scripts? You do say compatible with YEM, so that probably means you are using Battle Engine Melody, but I can't assume that since you are not using Yanfly Victory Aftermath so there's no reason to assume you're using every YEM script. So you should be more explicit as to which scripts you need this to be compatible with.
On the Enemy Stats Given request:
Do you mean in-game variables? If so, how do you want to set up which actor gets which variable? Should it simply be a range, like you specify 48 and variable 48 will hold that stat for actor 1, 49 for actor 2, etc... If you don't mean in-game variables, how do you want to set them up - should each "stat" be given a name? Do you want these to show up anywhere, such as the status scene?
For the Victory Aftermath:
As Terra (Ciel) suggested, you should really make a mockup in paint for each of the three pages you want. Each should be 544x416 and you should specify how big you want each window, where you want each stat to appear, etc... it will make it better for you too, as you will be able to see where there would be whitespace and lets you specify what to do with it. It's particularly important as you've specified that you don't want to use Yanfly's script, but have not specified what you dislike about Yanfly's. How would we know what to avoid? As well, where you are asking for it to show non-default stuff, like JP, you should provide a link to whatever script you are using that creates that stat.
Anyway, those are just a few questions I think any scripter would need the answer to in order to fulfill these requests. If you revise it according to those suggestions, I promise that I will do at least the Enemy Stats one.