Starting my first game...

OK, So I don't know if any of you have heard of Avernum, But is is a Indie Open world Rpg Made by Jeff Vogel of Spiderweb Software.  Although he did a good job, The games them self leave a lot to be asked.  So me being me, I got the notion to answer them my self in the form of a game. 

Basically the storyline will be this:

After a Failed attempt to exile the main hero via magical portal to a vast underground network of caves of which there is no return,  The hero first goes on the run from the Empire Hiding in towns and with a Eccentric Arch Mage who is himself wanted by the Empire..  After being hunted by the Imperial Solders for long enough,  he decides to fight back.
Along the way he meets others willing to join his Rebellion.  The band of Misfits from diffrent races trek from town to town, clearing them of the oppressive Imperial appointed Leaders, Corrupt Law and spy's and make their way back to the Empire Castle to take from the Emperor the crown that has been placed upon his head...   By Force.

I hope to learn about RmXP enough to implement a few good changes to the scripts and some new ideas for some awesome spells.  Right now I am working on the Intro Cut-scene and it is going OK.

Also I am working on the diffrent races that I will use.  There will be Giants, Sliths "Lizard Men", Humans, Ogres, Dragons, Goblins and Nephil "A Feline Race-and not the crummy 90% human ones either."   All the ingredients for a memorable game to say the least and to not toot my own horn so to say.

Please give me any feed back if at all possible from the short description, and I will try and get you some screenshots soon.

Get a large party script and have an actor of each race

First, your storyline is predicatable. I have played next to twelve games that all sound similar. If I hear about one more rebel faction I'm going to kick a kitten in the leg!