I'm not sure if it is allowed to do this here, but I'm currently participating in the Ubud Writer's and Reader's Festival 2010 Flash Fiction Challenge. So... I actually want to post the work here for critique and comments, but the rules of the competition forbid me to do so.
Can you guys go to this
website and then tell me what do you think of this piece?
The title of my work is Actus Dei. It is fine if you want to drop your criticism there, I don't mind. But would you please click on the
thumb up icon in that website? There is no registration required. A thumb would become a really great help for me to survive in that competition.
I deeply thank you for your help!!