[XP] Generic Chronicles Part 1: Cliche Quest XP

This game is my break.
I have to spend a lot of time on each and every detail of Legion, like Enemy stats, player stats, map design, etc. So on the side, I wanted to make a project for the hell of it, a project that does not have beautiful maps or a enthralling storyline. This is my result. Cliche Quest XP is the first part in a 3 part series, and all of em are going to be made for my fun. Sure Legion is fun to make, but only parts of it are. I enjoy making enemies, and items, and stuff but not mapping.
Enjoy this if you can.
The Generic and Cliche Story:

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Long ago, the evil demon Dikut terrorized the land. He ruled for many years until the Chosen hero came. The Hero and Dikut had a ferocious battle, but ultimately, Dikut was killed and peace was restored. 5000 years have passed, and Dikut has somehow been revived. Its up to the new hero to defeat Dikut once again and restore peace

Characters(You will forsee it):

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Arshes
The generic hero, he is the choosen one, even if he doesn't want to be. He loves to rob people and the people he robs don't seem to care.

Screenshots:

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Demo(v0.01):
It goes up to the first dungeon which is actually just a switch puzzle
http://www.mediafire.com/?3g9ug89o1hsrv7h
Walkthrough:
http://dylanleeconley.blogspot.com/2010/08/cliche-quest-xp-v001-demo-walkthrough.html
Its very short, i'd estimate that it will take you 5 minutes. BUT 5 VERY ENJOYABLE MINUTES Besides, when the next demo is released you can just copy youre save file and start where you left off

epic story

I was about to punch you in the face for copying off of Generic RMXP Game, but then I read the story and realized you weren't. I was so relieved I didn't have to punch you. 

passed it. was funny,lol

Anyway, the iron gate, you can walk bu the door side,lol no need to get the key ;p

Also, nice walkthrought

This does not sound funny or witty. It sounds lame and boring. It is not an original idea. The only skills you're going to enhance by making a mock project like this is your mapping skills.

Create a real game, even a light one, incorporate humor, but try something a little better.

The only way you're going to improve your skills is if you take something seriously.

Rawr.

well, as he said above, this is a break project, to chill from his main game... And i played it, and it were 5 minutes,lol it wasn't bad enogh for quit at start. i would say do the 2nd part

This does not sound funny or witty. It sounds lame and boring. It is not an original idea. The only skills you're going to enhance by making a mock project like this is your mapping skills.

Create a real game, even a light one, incorporate humor, but try something a little better.

The only way you're going to improve your skills is if you take something seriously.

Rawr.

Eh, maybe the sequel. My main project takes up all my "good" time. This is a "chill" project as DarkGamer put it. I'm not trying to improve at all. Do you remember when you first got RPG Maker and you had a lot of fun making crappy games? It wasn't about quality it was just fun to use. Thats what im tryin to do here, even if its a bit better. Want somethin serious then check out my main project "Legion"

passed it. was funny,lol

Anyway, the iron gate, you can walk bu the door side,lol no need to get the key ;p

Also, nice walkthrought

Oops yeah i forgot about that glitch....i'll fix it...
This isn't the first whole part just to say. This is a small demo. It took me probably 30 minuetes to make maybe.
Part 2 will be made in VX, and it will be mah first ever VX game

ok, i did save the save file, so when you release the addon of the 1st part, i can continue ;p

get it done!

I want to extend the demo to at least 10 minuetes, most likely more, and I still have another project, so hopefully you can wait a bit