[Visual] Lineart help

[Poetic_Alias]

Well I've been working on an enemy for my RPG and just finished placing the pixels over the pencil sketch and neatening it up. But somehow it doesn't look right... mainly on a couple of the rounded areas. Any suggestions?

[cozziekuns]

The Middle Left Pincer looks a little off, so I guess you could add one or two pixels in to make it connect better. Also, the Last Left Pincer could have its outline. Otherwise, when you colour it in everything should look better, so at least wait until then before making a judgement.

[Poetic_Alias]

Alright thanks. BTW, those are guns But I see what you mean

[Poetic_Alias]

I've made a little progress with the colouring. Any other tips or is it looking good?