[RPG Maker VX] [Demo] Skill Rock

[Zaile]

My 1st Project, and hopefully not my last.

Just a Quick Demo.
Town is not implemented yet, as I am still looking for a good strategy to make towns. 

Just looking for your thoughts on this game, you might notice that a lot of the items and sprites need work, I'll get to it at some point, but right now, I just want your thoughts!

-Demos Story-
After you return home from Dragmorin, you find out the Town of Flower is being harassed and threaten for all it's gold by an Orc called Engroth. You having returned from your training in Dragmorin, somehow put hope in the eyes of the towns people, and pushed all there problems onto you. You being a Fire Knight (one of the 4 "Element Knights") could not let this go on, and decided to search for Engroth.

Edit: Added another Download mirror

http://rapidshare.com/files/391098512/Skill_Rock__Demo_.exe.html

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=JN0HEZ7Z

[Grafikal]

screenshots please.

[Toxic]

Nice to see that your on your First game,but here are some tips.When your gonna post a demo try ending it at a point where people or players want to go on.Cut some things out to make it seem better if you were to try the whole thing.Also im a bit nit picky with things so don't take this offensive of harsh,but I think your mapping needs a tad work from looking at the only map pic you posted.But since it's your first game I say Good Job so far keep at it