[Writing] Into The Fire

Its supposed to be a metal songs just so you know. Wrote this about a year ago and just now dug it up. Its story is not based on anything true so don't try to compare..
-----------------------
Sins, Sins,
They make you grin
Burning and suffering
Their painful voices muffling
We will put you in your place
You are gods mistake!
Flames. rising. higher
Encasing you
And the pain. you. sired.
Comes unto you
Be erased
Walk into the flames
its where you belong anyway.....
The children cry
and scream
This dreadful requiem
For the past hope gone away
How much more can they take...
you dont care anyway....
As
They
Cry
you devise
More forms of torture
for the less fortunate
And as far away as
over the seas
The wise men hear the screams
Of pain for the young
No longer tame
As righteous as you may believe
The devil controls these wicked schemes....
You are gods mistake
We will put you in your place!
Flames. rising. higher
Encasing you
And the pain. you. sired.
Comes unto you
Be erased
Walk into the flames
its where you belong anyway.....
Its where you belong anyway.......
It all will end today....
Nothing stays the same always....
It all ends today....

I'm not much of a metal fan, but it sounds like something Metallica might sing.