[Music] Small Guitar Part

[Kokowam]

yeh, no sensible title again.

However, I'm pretty happy with this. Of course, I can't perfectly put what I want onto Tabit as I would while playing guitar, but this was close enough.

I just wanted to see what feedback I could get on this. However, this was meant to be something that I play while singing (:x) so it's pretty simple. If I could get any feedback on how to spice it up and whatnot, that'd be cool.

Any ideas for a different chord progression would be COOL

[gameface101]

@mastermoo - I peeped your midi and I must say...
                   this has such a good vibe... I'm eager to hear an acoustic version!  
                   
                   I'm not quite certain how I would describe the progression through a post...
                   but if you are to sing, then do something to compliment your vocal range.
             
                   if you plan on using the midi to sing over...
                   I would lower the volume just a little and add some effect (reverb chorus)
                   it sounds like it's got everything as in complete...

                   Nicely done...let me know if you would like some drums!

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[Kokowam]

Ahaha, it's supposed to be acoustic, but .midi's rarely play anything as it should Also, the .midi's just to show what it sounds like; I don't have any recording equipment at all () so yeh.

Thanks for the offer, but I usually write guitar parts for just acoustics. Of course, lyrics need to be made, but that'll come later.

[Nightwolf]

This is really good man. But, I felt something off at a few parts. Actually, it's one part thats there a lot so I replaced the 2 with a 3 in some places and 2 with a 5.... but this is just what i feel. I think you probably wanted it like that and there's something wrong with me.
pretty awesome. =D

[Kokowam]

Err, I see where you're going with it, but I have a couple of things to say:

- The reuse of the Gadd9 (I think that's the chord? first measure) doesn't resolve as well as the "D/F#" (except changed up) into the next few chords.
- the 0053xx is kinda eh for me because having notes that are the same doesn't sound as full. Plus, I like the sound of Cmaj7

However, even though I'm not big on your ideas at the moment, they are great ideas for when I actually write down some lyrics and feel as if the chords that I used aren't as fitting.