There's been a name change!
Hero's Tales - Edgar's Journey --> Eternity's Point
Now it sounds a lot more interesting xD
You know.. i didn't notice earlier but the story reminds me of "Avatar", whit the fire clan being the strongest attacking the rest of the world, leaded by a power hungry king, not bad
.. But now that you introduced the game concept whit different allegiance's or clans, you should explain a little more about them dont you think??
who are the Twilight?? what do they do? ideologies?
PS: Use call script and type:
$game_system.hud = false
To hide the HUD if you are making an intro.. and change to true to show it again