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[Visual] Character sketch - Feedback wanted

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Okay, I've sketched out my character in its entirety now.

But I need feedback, on the anatomy mainly. Does it look realistic / in proportion? Personally I think the feet on the backside look weird but I just don't know how to fix it. It never looks good. Also the backside doesn't have hands yet because I'm having some trouble with them.

The thing under his armor is spandex, that's why those parts look a little tight.

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The armor is going to be adjusted a little still, but this is basically how it's going to look. Anything I need to change, or adjust?
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he's cross-eyed

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Okay anything else?  ???

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his arms are almost as thick as his thighs, I'd suggest making them a bit thicker.

and his hands are a bit big but i know how that happens because hands are hard to draw and they are harder to make look good when smaller.

and as far as the armor maybe something to connect the tasset pieces together like a belt, unless they are supposed to be attached to the spandex.
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his face is a bit too long, the eyes are a bit too high (give the man a forehead), and he's got no crotch at all.  Not saying to give him a bulge or anything, but the way you have it, it looks like he's gotten a cutitoffame.

also what strike said.

both front and back feet look like they're at an angle.  Unless he's standing on a hill, then his feet should just be straight on, you're drawing them as though from above.

his feet also seem a bit small.

that's all I can see/describe atm.  Other than that it's alright
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Thanks for the tips. Yeah that Chrono Cross resemblance was what I meant when I said adjustments. I want to step away from that, because I guess it's not hard to see Serge in there. I knew that would happen when I decided to go witth a bandana.