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#1 • Apr 19, 2009
    • Hi, would you mind giving me feedback on my quickly made, but hopefully striking, titlepage? Hoping that it isn't as bad as the last post I made here.
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    Ignore my terrible jokes, and check the attachment.
    Edit: Don't expect fast replies to your feedback, as I'm currently in Singapore, and will be flying back home soon, so not only a completely different time zone, but a 16 hour flight, going straight to bed, school next day etc etc.
    « Last Edit: April 19, 2009, 02:56:13 PM by Sharkbainte »

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    #2 • Apr 19, 2009
    • Try playing around with the text a bit. Move it around to one of the corners, try centering it, stretching it, etc. It doesn't really awaken any thoughts for me as it looks right now, it's sort of calm and collected. Try adding more 'action' and life into it.
    :taco: :taco: :taco:
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    #3 • Apr 19, 2009
    • Ok, thanks, I'll try with that but I'm hardly a great artist, and only make resources when I need them, and even then, I make them simple.  ;)

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    Quote from: Rasse on April 19, 2009, 02:59:53 PM
    Try playing around with the text a bit. Move it around to one of the corners, try centering it, stretching it, etc.
    Well I've certainly done that.
    « Last Edit: April 19, 2009, 03:31:46 PM by Sharkbainte »

    Best Latin Quotes:
    Me transmitte sursum, Caledoni!
    Beam me up, Scotty!
    Sit vis vobiscum.
    May the Force be with you.
    Nihil curo de ista tua stulta superstitione.
    I'm not interested in your dopey religious cult.
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    Mama told you not to make that uu-uu noise...
    #4 • Apr 20, 2009
    • The second one definitely looks much better.

    I like it, but it still seems too plain.
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