Umineko no Naku Koro Ni character sets TAKING REQUESTS :]

[Bernkastel]

Updates: Kyrie, Dr.Nanjo, Siesta 410, Siesta 00, Kinzo, Beatrice(Formal), Gaap, Asmodeus, Ange, down(maria,white cloaked thief, random one-winged eagle..dude), random one-winged eagle..dude, random one-winged eagle..girl.

hm, I kinda rushed a LOT of these..

like, the really messy ones are:

Gaap, Asmodeus, Siesta's, Beatrice, and Ange, Kyrie ._.

I just really wanted to get them done. I wanna complete the collection. Also, during the time I've been gone, I haven't been fixing up the characters that you guys have been telling me to..I'm just being lazy. BUT, I will fix them.


If using any of these, please credit me if possible :]<3

Here are some of their battlers. I clearly didn't make them, and you will need to resize them. made by the ACTUAL game creator.

SOME battlers:
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Bernkastel:


Lambadelta:


Beatrice(Formal):


Beatrice(Common):


Eva Beatrice(Bottem of her dress is semi-transparent):


Goats:


Battler:


Jessica:


George:


Maria(There's a semi-transparent part, at the bottem of her skirt. The part that looks funny.):


Maria(Witch):


Kannon:


Shannon:


Rudolf:


Krauss:


Rosa:


Natsuhi:


Kyrie:


Lucifer:


Blephegor:


Asmodeus:


Gaap:


Kinzo:


Siesta 45:


Siesta 410:


Siesta 00:


Ange:


Dr.Nanjo:




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Checklist

Ushiromiya:

Kinzo
Krauss
Eva
Rudolf
Rosa

Natsuhi
Hideyoshi
Kyrie

Jessica
George
Battler
Maria

Servants:

Genji
Shannon
Kannon
Ghoda
Kumasawa
Dr.Nanjo

Witches:

Beatrice
Virgilia
New Beatrice(Eva)
ANGE Beatrice
Lady MARIA
Bernkastel
Lambadelta
Erika Furudo

Furniture:
Ronove
Siesta 45
Siesta 556
Siesta 00
Siesta 410
Seven Sisters of Purgatory
Goats
Sakutaro
Dianor A Knox
Corneila
Gertrude

[spoiler]Overview(So far):


So, here they are:

Shannon:


Kannon(WHY IS IT WHITE >:[  It's a PNG though.):


Maria:


George( Needs glasses. Can't figure out a good way to make them...):


Battler:


Jessica(Credit to Pickle\Ice Axe for the hair):


Virgilia:


Rudolf:


Krauss:


Natsuhi:


Rosa:


Kyrie(Please don't comment on this tragedy):


Dr.Nanjo:


Hideyoshi:


Ronove:


Female:


Male:


Down:


Eva Beatrice:


Frederica Bernkastel(Forgive me, for such a horrible set)


Genji(decided to just use butler hair):


Ghoda:


Kumasawa:


Kinzo:


Gaap:


Beatrice(Formal):


Ange:


Asmodeus:





Unfinished

Beatrice (Common):



Lambadelta:



"Eventually" going to be made characters:

Siesta 45:


Siesta 410:


Siesta 00:



Goats:



I'd post two of the seven sisters, but apparently, they're not good enough.

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[Bernkastel]

BUMP~

Lossa new stuff :]

[DeathLock~]

I don't like the template you're using, the legs always seem a bit off or too thin.

[spoiler=Quick Comments]Shannon: Legs are messed up.

Kannon: JPEG?! =x

Maria: The pink palette needs darker colors. Legs are messed up.

George: You should shade in a way to define wrinkles in the clothing. Sithjester has some good examples of suit shading. The hair needs a lot more lighter colors.

Battler: You should shade in a way to define wrinkles in the clothing. Sithjester has some good examples of suit shading.

Jessica: Credit to Pickle/Ice Axe for the hair.

Virgilia: By far the best sprite in the list.

Rudolf: You should shade in a way to define wrinkles in the clothing. Sithjester has some good examples of suit shading.

Krauss: You should shade in a way to define wrinkles in the clothing. Sithjester has some good examples of suit shading.

Natsuhi: The side (right), the hair is cut off comparing it to the left.

Rosa: Just add at least one more color for the extremely lighter parts on the dress.

Ronove: You should shade in a way to define wrinkles in the clothing. Sithjester has some good examples of suit shading. Is that a monocle on his face? I thought it was a glass eye. =P

Eva Beatrice: Add saturation, to make it stand out.

Beatrice (Common): Add lighter colors. What happened to the arms and legs? o.o

Beatrice (Formal): Add lighter colors. What happened to the arms and legs? o.o

Bernkastel: My only suggestion is that you add a light halo for the hair, to make it more natural.

Lambadelta: Darker colors in the pink palette, but not too dark.

Siesta 45: Don't know if I should comment since you say this is a 'fail character'.

Goats: Don't know if I should comment since you say this is a 'fail character'.[/spoiler]

[Karo Rushe]

>__>;;Bernkastel attracks me a lot, *Desiring to see a complete version*

[Bernkastel]

I'm using the Character Maker XP templates.

and I want them to have thinish legs :S

And, Caro, I will finish Bernkastel. That comment made me smile


Thanks for feedback.
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Kannon:
oh my god, major ouchies!

I'll fix it right away


Shannon:
Her legs look funny..? Hm..she tests fine and looks normal to me..

what frame of her legs look funny? O.o

Everyone in suits:

Yes yes, I'll go see in a minute.

Maria:

her legs look funny..?

is it because I erased the space between her legs so it looks like she actually HAS two legs?

and the reason on her pink is: I don't like black outlines on pink :\ and that's the exact color she has...which is a problem.

Beatrice: Ugh.. Don't get me started on how much I hate that character. I think I'll just start scratch. It was like..my second character ever o.o

Goats: I may finish, so I'll remove them from the 'fail list'.

Siesta 45: T~T no comment. But I'd like you to.

Jessica: I'll credit him\her right away.

Rosa: What part?

Lambadelta: She needs alot of work, and I may not finish her. :\

Bernkastel: Same with Lambadelta. I will finish her for real, though.

Natsuhi: Care to explain in a little more detail please?

Virgilia: Why, thank you very much. She was kind of a pain.

Ronove: It's a monocle, I've asked people about it and they tell me right away it looks like a monocle...but I'll try to fix it.     It's prolly because you've may have never seen his character for real, like the others.

Eva Beatrice: I just made her, and I'm quite happy with it, but you're right, once I look at it. She needs a little bit of a darkish.....ness.[/spoiler]

[DeathLock~]

The difference between the original RTP legs, and what you do with your sprite legs. Don't push them away, on such small sprites, details like that make it look freakish. But, maybe that's only my opinion.

and the reason on her pink is: I don't like black outlines on pink :\ and that's the exact color she has...which is a problem.

No black, only darker shades of pink, maybe a purple/pink would help.

Siesta 45: Darker colors, that's your main issue right there. Your color choice still needs work with darker shades.
Goats: The suit is the same as the others. The goat head needs a regular shade of black, consider a recolor rather than removing the whole color itself.

Rosa: What part?

Overall the dress itself. I can't really go beyond that, I'm not good in explaining things in detail. ^^;

Natsuhi: Care to explain in a little more detail please?

Unless, this was suppose to be like this. Its just that its weird since it goes left with the hair behind the head showing, but the right it disappears considering that both hairlines are on the same level.

Ronove: It's a monocle, I've asked people about it and they tell me right away it looks like a monocle...but I'll try to fix it.     It's prolly because you've may have never seen his character for real, like the others.

Nah, doesn't matter. Its only a first impression, before I took a good look.

[Karo Rushe]

For Siesta, I suggest to grab that same Pink and darken it. That should help a lot better.

[Bernkastel]

Hm..


Natsuhi's Hair is supposed to be like that, since you're already seeing it. Look at her ears. that'll explain it.

One side shows her ears where there's not much hair, and the other side doesn't, because she puts her hair on one side...


and Maria, I do need to redo her, but I don't really wanna work on maria right now.

I'll add lighter colors to Rosa.

And about the template, I'll fix that definitely, it does look freakish, but to me, I think it's because it has no clothes. I'm just saying.. you know?

Siesta 45: I hate her now. I wanna shove her in the recycle bin, but that'd be carelss ._. I want to get her done eventually, her outfit is crazy :\

oh, and the goats: their heads are like..shadows or something.

Not really supposed to be clear.

for example:
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[Karo Rushe]

I think for the Goat's head, Frankensprite the head of the RTP's Wolf/Beast Monster's head at least to get the shape, Since the Goat itself is too small .___.;;

[Bernkastel]

mehh

You think so o.o

I think I need to edit the back of the neck...

Ugh. I just thought of all of the changes I'm going to have to make once the anime comes out -______________-

[Karo Rushe]

~__~ There's no need to change if it's unnecessary, only chance/edit them unless You see it necessary.

Regarding the back:

[Bernkastel]

uu-uu! I may actually do this one!!!

Thank you!

That helps alot, because looking at it from the side, makes it seem more goat-like.

[Grafikal]

O_o  i nvr noticed this topic. I like your sprites gurevich42

[Bernkastel]

Wow.....really?

o.o

Thank you:D

That means alot to me. I work hard on these.

Caro, and Deathlock help me with them alot.

I count on them for tips, so I  should credit them some..

[Karo Rushe]

I'm more excited to see the finished Bernkastel sprite itself >:3

I dunno if credits is proper for tips thou, just that I like it when people do make their efforts on making their sprites instead of requesting them without trying. (Or giving up half-way)

[DeathLock~]

You don't have to give credit, because we only told gave you advice, we didn't do any of the work itself. ^^

For the goat, you could do something like this, as the how the shading is under the hair.



What I mean is, the top part being the darkest, then slowly moving down to the black fur.
[Credit goes for Reives or legacyblade, not sure]

[Bernkastel]

Aha, I know what you mean.

Well if I make what I like, maybe others will like it. And I know what you mean.

I've given up on requests, but I'll finish them.I know I will.

I just take alot of breaks.


To DeathLock:

yes yes, I thought about that. I might actually do that, but their entire head is shadow...so..I don't even know right now.

[DeathLock~]

Well, you could have a very dark fur color. The example you've shown for Goats is what I'm saying, the top part is completely dark and unclear, and it slowly moves to show little part of the nose.

[Bernkastel]

Yeah, I suppose that could work, too..

I think I'll try that.


Caro:

I made your Bernkastel set o3o

I'm not happy with it.

[Bernkastel]

big bump.

added battlers

[Karo Rushe]

*Caro Agrees*
Something regarding the way her skirt moves isn't right at all, it should have that 'swing effect' on it. Take the example on the RTP's Fighter09 or my own Hikari >__> to get a reference on how to make that garment piece to move right.

[Bernkastel]

there's no fighter 9

;_;

[Karo Rushe]

 

Try to use her as a reference:
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See how it moves & fades. Althou the hand gets in the middle, when moving back, the opening of the skirt/coat would become smaller, and going Up, in terms of pixels. Another better example:
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Even thou Bernakel's isn't as big as Zetsu over here, but it's the best example I have to explain the above.

Use these as a reference.

[Bernkastel]

Oh I see.

I'll get back to Bern when I'm finished with the rest of the family.

I have only two more to go

[Bernkastel]

Buuuummp.

I've added some more<3