Being your first game is not an excuse, dont take this as a flame but as criticism.
1. Your map sucks. I thought it was good until i saw the log border (which is the only bad part). Try to make it systematic, i know its a jungle but still everything looks crammed with less space to walk.
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2. Your character development is lame. See, I Know its a first game and its just for fun and whatever but your main character.
Why did you use the FIRST sprite of the database, use the RTP, no problem, but not the FIRST sprite.
You could've done beter.
3. You haven't given us much detail. If i wanna tell you something about Final Fantasy, i wouldn't tell it like this:
Theres cloud
he got a sword
he good
then bad guys come
we kill
Win
Well, i'd say like that but not someone else so there's a place you can improve.
4. Lol @ chopping balls cuz everyone's balls are like stones here. You gotta grind them
5. Also, you didn't tell us something about the characters either. I know its your first game and you dont wanna actually post it cuz you dont need it anymore but please.
I expect much better than you, vixx.
Good luck for the next one