[Music] Hopefully not an OFFENSIVE amalgamation of sounds.

Indeed, my first tentative imitation badly-synthesized song. The idea is that of coming in contact with a much older and extinct civilization; the ending and beginning themes reflect the melancholy of the given ruins, and the stuff in the middle is something of a glimpse into their past glory. Yes, it's that simple; I defined it entirely in one sentence.

Yeats?

It's alright. A little bare, and slightly amateurish, but it's definitely not awful.

modern algebra: Yeats, yes. A reference was better than the other working title.

Arlen: Well, thank you. Any tips on improvement?

Add reverb and maybe a little delay. The reverb will make it sound like its in a concert hall. Otherwise, the notes used are perfect, you just need to adjust your sound a bit.