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[Visual] Tears of Infinity - Beta Title Screen

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Alternate: http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/1364/infinitytitlebyryosisla6.png

As I stated in my introduction thread, I'm an up-and-coming RPG Maker XP developer, and thanks to it's support for such color-rich files, I'm finally able to create graphically intense scenes. The first one I'm focusing on is the title screen. Believe it or not, I still consider it to be largely unfinished despite the detail. In fact, the PDN file itself has over 20 layers!

Comments and criticism is much appreciated. Also, if you want to download the program I used to make it, head on over to Paint.NET's website. Download it, add a few plugins, and see what you can come up with!

- Ryosis
« Last Edit: May 25, 2015, 06:48:58 PM by boe »
Eddard Stark art by Teiiku

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This is really amazing. O:

you awoke in a burning paperhouse
from the infinite fields of dreamless sleep

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I agree.
How come I missed this?
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A splendid work, indeed.

However, I'm sure some critiques won't hurt, seeing that you said it yourself. =)
The text "INFINITY" is nice, however, it's a bit unclear. If I may say that it's covered up by those black fogs... You can do something about it, really. You just put the 'fog' in the wrong position that it covers up the text. True, it can create an artistic effect in some way, yet in your case it 'erases' some part of the letter 'F' and 'I'. Not a really bad mistake, really, but why, I'm just pointing out what I have in mind.

Now, the text below the title... I believe you want it to be blurry and a little bit unclear, yes? If so, you ended up making it completely UNCLEAR. I have some difficulties in reading them, and perhaps it's my eyes fault--but I don't think so.

Overall, the other effects are great. Really good one, I admit. I like they way you blend the render with the background.

I'm sorry if my words are too harsh or maybe they have mistakes inside. English is not my first language in the first place.

Keep up the good job, though. =)

JAP