They aren't bad, but I don't think all of them deserve a "tick". I like the overall thing about this new template, a lot actually - don't get me wrong on that- but the head looks too small, and the body sometimes look "weird" and/or bady shaded. Just my opinion though. Chars I think could be improved:
Civilian 8 - Legs are too short, body is too thin and long/tall
Civilian 7 & 6 - Be careful with the hair. Looks too "close" to the head. It needs to be more "light" (not in colour). Mostly 7 here, but 6 has kinda the same hair
Civilian 9 - Same as Civilian8, but this guy also looks like a girl - from the side, he seems to have breasts, and that looks weird...
While I LOVE Jack very much, his armour makes his leg and other higher features diminish. The colour of armor and legs could be fixed to a sharper and clearer colour in my opinion.
ALL IN ALL:
Keep it up!!