Kingdom Hearts:Forgotten Friends

Yeah im red blood I was making Tales of the stone, then people said I had horrible grammer. Later my computer broke so I had to get a new one and I couldn't use Rpg Maker Xp, Now Im making a new project
                          Kingdom Hearts:Forgotten Friends-

The story takes place with a new character,not sora NOR riku it's about a boy named "Roy" (if someone would give me a better name I will be happy to use it if it's good) Roy was a boy who woke up One day after his friends riku and sora dissapeared and was searching for sora for 2 years after 2 years sora left right before roy could catch back up with Sora and,Roy is now finding a way to get back home to destiny islands no matter What.

It starts off Roy explains ^ The above,
Then Some Demon Guy Comes and He says"You have the crystals" Roy says "I dont know what you are talking about But you dont seem to nice" Then he runs towards him and Slashes him then the demon says "Nice" He Beats up roy and roy wakes up in a room and he has no idea how he got there,It explains how he got there later in the game,Then He goes to the with some king and then roy says he's in search of the Crystals,The king says " I totally Under stand Have them All" Then a Slime appears you fight it then the king calls the guards.

Later Some guy comes and he says that isn't that nice This guys name is tony. Then like 20 Guards come and guy beats em in one hit.

Thats all im explaining I dont want to give away the whole thing so far,The game right now is around 30-40 Minutes So far :'( Once its around 2 hours I might release demo.

and please dont say anything Negative,unless it's about my grammer.

The game sounds nothing like Kingdom hearts at begining but after you beat the first boss it's more like kingdom hearts.

PICTURES

Encounter With First boss

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First Encounter With First Boss

SPOILER-MAIN CHARACTER GETS REAL PISSED

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Title Screen

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Game uses actual Kingdom Hearts &KH2 MIDIS

played this awhile ago  and it was cool

Yeah, I let hoorah play it so far he liked it

Screenies?

I will post screenies after I can find a good King mickey Icon All other ones like walk diagonally 

EDIT:3 SCREENSHOTS POSTED

Your Grammar and Spelling sucks dongs.

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Whats wrong with me! im fine making normal comments when I make something big I try so hard for people to like it I kinda get Shy or something and grammer sucks...and my spelling is fine...

I am not continuing the project until I get more comments.
I dont care if you hate the idea,or love it.
I just want to see what people think, so until I get more comments im not continuing the project.

Sorry, but this is pathetic.
Do not make any excuses to discontinue the project, be independent and do not depend on other people too much, seriously.

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Whats wrong with me! im fine making normal comments when I make something big I try so hard for people to like it I kinda get Shy or something and grammer sucks...and my spelling is fine...

Sorry, but 'Dispair' should be 'Despair'. Look before you leap, okay?

My comment on your game is so far the maps look to empty, better practice making more maps in VX.
Screenshots that you have provided also does not give us much info about the environment, player participation, or features in the game - post more or post screenshots that are more relevant.

Yeah I undersand my mapping sucks.Thanks for the heads up about that.

And I said I wouldn't continue project if people didnt say what they think because Who in the right minds would make a game no one plays? I mean its not I dont want to stop it I liked my idea but I wanted to see what others think Imagine

You make a game around 23 Hours Long or sumtin Idk And no one downloads it wouldn't that make you mad you worked ALLL THAT TIME FOR NOTHING Now eventually Someone is gonna At least download it but who says there gonna like it? Again I just don't wanna make a game no one will play.

The spelling error What are you talking about dispair? I did not even said that I said Dissapeared if thats what you are talking about.

No on your title you misspelled despair.

Also, your mapping is horrible, it's square and unrealistic and your story is shallow, full of clichés and a weak plot.

You should really work on all of it and use a spell check and proper punctuation.

Encounter With First boss

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First Encounter With First Boss

Why is there water under the tree like that? It looks weird.

SPOILER-MAIN CHARACTER GETS REAL PISSED

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This map looks strange. It's also empty.

Title Screen

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Game uses actual Kingdom Hearts &KH2 MIDIS

I could make you a title screen... >_>

The spelling error What are you talking about dispair? I did not even said that I said Dissapeared if thats what you are talking about.

*coughdissappearcough*
Well to me, making a game is not about to show and brag the finished product to others.
I play my own games, and usually I don't publish it. Anywhere.
Except if I think the game is so awesome that everyone should play it, and well .... I don't.

As for the mapping of  the Second spoiler, the cliff (or wall) is in different heights. It should be of the same height, for example 2 tiles.

I could make you a title screen... >_>

If you could that would be great.

Oh and The dispair I didn't Make that Title Screen.My friend on msn did.

Why is there water under the tree like that? It looks weird.

I will TRY and make everyone happier,by trying to get better at mapping and
to learn better grammer.

Okay updates,I got an abs I didn't make it,BUT it sucks so im editing it this is what i plan to do with the abs
1)Jump Levels 1-5 Each Level Is a sqare farther jump
2)More then 1 Kind of critical Hit(As in it can be,Critical,Super Critical,And Extremly Critical)
3)Hit more then one

So far when I downloaded you can only hit 2 Ways Critical Or A damage
Ex:Fighting Boss I keep hitting 56's And criticals 100
So im trying to make it something like-56,50,34,54,23,100,Miss,20,miss,Critical-120
So it can be more hard and more fun.

I guess you can say I improved Mapping a little-New Screenies soon

IF YOU DON'T know what an Abs is its when you run around and attack,NON-TURN TAKING.

Ok
-No one likes the story SOLUTION:People Like Original Storys I soppose not games about other games
-My mapping sucks SOLUTION:Ill make like 20 different Projects (NOT POSTING HERE) To get better at mapping
-My grammer sucks SOLUTION:Ill find something...

Is this project abandoned?
It looks like it, and the screenshots no longer work