Hmm... I like that.
Some parts, I think, are the same note/same pitch so they kinda play at the same time which sounds empty so I might change that. Can I use it? I'll give credit, of course (not to be a downer, but whoever looks at the credits? >_>)
Yeah. If so, I'll probably use it for, like, a change thing. I usually do a pattern of:
o. Intro (sometimes)
i. Main thing
ii. Changed up
iii. Main thing
iv. Changed up
And so on and after a while, an ending.
XD
EDIT: Arrow, after looking back, your way was the way I wanted it done. A lot of it also sounds like how I wanted it, originally (XD), but I ended up only getting what I have because... Well yeah. I worked with 3 over 4 for a while and then just spaced it over 4 over 4 and added some extra notes XD.